I'm going to be honest and say I really like the story when it first started but along the way it started to get weird and a little out there not saying it's a bad story but kind of got turned off it at some point for multiple reasons one of them being without giving too much away that the author decided to start giving out powers to other people because the main character had powers but we're supposed to be a gift which I have really disagree with I believe I brought this up to the author and he said he needed a balance out the world which in my opinion makes his gifts Absolutely pointless and negates the whole beginning of the story which I actually thought was kind of the 1 of the coolest part of the story The other main part of why I drew issue with the story is the author started to go way too deep and change the history of the world Some of it made sense from the story perspective and other parts we're just odd and did not make sense in any way shape or form it just got a little too strange and out there for me I think I stopped around chapter 108 reason I'm giving this three stars is because I really have not decided whether I want to continue reading this and if it's good or bad yet

this temporary rating and review, but i will give you spoiler... Heaven decide give him "System" but Heaven also made Rule : The More Your Power Grow, The More Power That Oppose You Grow. thats mean everybody in planetos/westeros have invisible or hidden system for themself, then what its different MC with have system and doesnot have ?? well, it does matter actually for me, heck even i hope MC can grow as strong as Saiyan, and let see bunch of Saiyan wrecking havoc in planetos...

I hate novels suggesting children as low as 4 years old fighting like some kind of pro. Choosing warrior over magic was a bad choice. I think 5% of the word count goes to “My lord” and other addresses. A 5-7 year old child given control over his territory and speaking to other lords etc like an equal and suggesting that either they join him or be his enemies. To the author I would suggest some tume skip. I hate these novels that Herve people spamming reviews.

Your writing on dialogue of a disaster, it feels like a meme. "ofc bloody snow, certainly quiet wolf!" the same for "xx from house xx". So, your story is slowly transforming into a skiping one, the ones you overview and then check a few things and then the next one. The issue is your writing and some decisions that make no sense, making this not relatable at all. At the same time it doesn't have the "serious" feeling this kind of series should have, so this is getting old real quick. My recommendation would be to read more and keep track of interesting dialogues to add to your vocabulary. The story (plot and new stuff etc) is really good for me, that is interesting. If you improve your writing it could go far in this site. Perhaps a few more challenging ones once you Edit all the chapters and make them good/competitive. IF that is your goal at all, if not ignore all this rambling, if you are just doing this for fun and you give zero phoks then my comment serves no purpose. I wouldn't recommend this with high expectations. Proceed at your own peril. (I will read tho)

This story was great until around chapter 50 where he lost all martial prowess and intellect against Dacey Mormont. Then after she says that she found his friend more attractive, you have them like each other out of no where a few chapters later. Dacey sucks as a pairing as well, no political gain at all, and she sucks as a person.

The premise of the story is very nice and could be an amazing story, however the author for of writing is extremely cluncky and the amount of POVS makes the story confusing due to the fact that the author can not properly label corectly would definitely give it a shot if the author fixed the errors.

To be honest, I expected more from this wondering it has 3, 6 million views, 90 reviews, and nearly 180 chapters but It seems I can't. -Failure of common sense - Random Comedy where it isn't needed or wanted - Constant shouting in random moments -cringy Monologue - Logic mistakes - Trying to nerf the Mc by making the World stronger( God and the Angels put him in this World I doubt it acts according to Le Chatelier even when this isn't chemistry, it feels like you applied this law here Etc etc

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