Newnoob

Yo author, when Grid acquired the Legendary class didn't the server announced his accomplishment in all over Satisfy? Did the same happen in your fic? As far as I remember I don't think so you added that bit, if you had then surely more player would have been aware of the legendary threshold that they can reach later down the game. If not can you add that and show canon characters reaction to it?

Seriously Fugaku kicked Mikoto out of the room 👀 like literally 👀. Bruh these Chinese authors are different breed 😂

Post more chapters

Really how? Please explain. The guy already mentioned it. And scribble hub is a shit site. I prefer to read fics here. So the guy is doing us a service by reposting it here. You don't have to be a ass about it.

Bruh he did mention that. Also the translated version in webnovel starts from Ch 400. So he's doing us a service by reposting it here

Exactly

Nah man this is not good or healthy in any way. This story seems like an exciting take on the multiverse genre with a uniqueness of the GOAT Loki who is likely going to travel through the multiverse. The world-building and creativity has great potential to become a great fanfic in the future. However, the unhealthy sex obsession will likely ruin this in the future. The obsession with gender bender and other kinks is all about pure indulgence. Like if you want to keep mc gay then keep him gay, no need to gender bend him to have sex with males. The readers will immerse in this story when they will read it but changing the tone of the main character just so you can is going to be the story’s undoing. Why go to such lengths? This is your story and you have every right to include things that you like or dislike but writing this in the synopsis and expecting readers to not react is a mistake. When readers read a story they’ll judge no matter what you say, this is a great story no doubt about it but including such elements in such way is borderline narcissistic. Such themes take the story into unsettling territory. Instead of using these elements to explore deep or meaningful ideas they exist purely for shock value making the story feel more disturbing than compelling. There was real potential here………….this could have been a fascinating story for Loki fans. But instead, it’s weighed down by sexual preference. The creativity is there but unfortunately it’s bound to be wasted on the wrong focus.

Welp I was a fan of the original one and it pissed me off after author dropped it. It feels good that you decided to rewrite this, looking forward to it. Although I haven't read any chapters of your work yet, but I will read em after they cross 100 chapter. So don't you dare drop this. Also who's the love interest of MC's can you give a hint, as far as I remember Ygritte had a thing with Dimeric in the original, so is that the same here? Anyways hope to see you complete this soon 😄😄

What I want to know is if the kama seal is still working? If it is can he use it to steal Sharingan. And if it is not working then whats the point of loosing such a cool power for a forced devil fruit tree. And if it is working what's the use of devil fruit if he can literally absorb other powers?

Unnecessary battle 😶 just be done with it. Ashburn's struggle at this stage seems exaggerated.