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2021-12-30 09:28

I don’t Really know what to say about this novel. For me it has too many Chinese Vibes, words like “sneered, disdain, giving face, senior, brat” etc just ruined it for me.At least there was no “ currting death”. The Uchihas are portrayed like a typical Young master Clan and the Hokage like a scheming and stupid villain. I know that the Author read too many Chinese novels and his very being is already corrupted, that’s why I know it will take some time to write a story without the typical Wuxi’s stuff. I just hope someday the Autor will rewrite some chapters. If I made some mistakes please correct me, English is not my first language. I want to learn through my mistakes. I hope I was not too harsh with my review, it’s still a great fan fic but currently just not for me.

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I can understand this friend, But u should know that this was his first novel so mistakes and unrelated things are bound to happen. Let's give him some time I hope the author will start growing as his experience increases

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