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hunte_pro
hunte_proLv43yr
2021-10-04 10:54

well by honest opinion on this 1. the conversations seemed to be forced 2. I feel characters need more background development 3. need more in detail narration 4.try to take it in a slow pace(suggestion) 5.try to make changes realistic(suggestion)

Naruto: The Template System

Navy_King
4.6
133 Chs

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NotLastApril
NotLastAprilLv4

I agree with your take on this story

3yr
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skiptail
skiptailLv4

And the fact that this even reached top 1 in power ranking truly baffles me. The story itself is pretty mediocre, starting with the stupid powerups, dumb down original characters that are supposedly shrewd in the og series. Reading this made me wonder if i was reading a chinese naruto fanfic a couple of times

3yr
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Blackson
BlacksonLv1

Maybe Bots boosting this. But more likely the quality of fanfiction on this site is very low and this one is somewhat decent. You can find a few gems here and there but on average this site fanfiction are of worse quality than ao3 or fanfiction net and the ranking system is pretty bad since there is no follow or favorite system. I nearly always forget I even have power stones.

skiptail:And the fact that this even reached top 1 in power ranking truly baffles me. The story itself is pretty mediocre, starting with the stupid powerups, dumb down original characters that are supposedly shrewd in the og series. Reading this made me wonder if i was reading a chinese naruto fanfic a couple of times
3yr
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D1cky_101
D1cky_101Lv14

Hey bro can you tell what website you talking about

Blackson:Maybe Bots boosting this. But more likely the quality of fanfiction on this site is very low and this one is somewhat decent. You can find a few gems here and there but on average this site fanfiction are of worse quality than ao3 or fanfiction net and the ranking system is pretty bad since there is no follow or favorite system. I nearly always forget I even have power stones.
3yr
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Tvirus
TvirusLv14

ao3 is called archive of our own and is a huge fanfiction website with just about everything you can imagine. and fanfiction.net is pretty self explanitory.

D1cky_101:Hey bro can you tell what website you talking about
3yr
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Movezbatch
MovezbatchLv4

Yeah, I was honestly shocked at how successfull this story was (and still is). Tried reading 4 chapters and had to force myself through them. I can't believe people like this thing and even pay him money on ptrn...

skiptail:And the fact that this even reached top 1 in power ranking truly baffles me. The story itself is pretty mediocre, starting with the stupid powerups, dumb down original characters that are supposedly shrewd in the og series. Reading this made me wonder if i was reading a chinese naruto fanfic a couple of times
3yr
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D1cky_101
D1cky_101Lv14

Thanks man

Tvirus:ao3 is called archive of our own and is a huge fanfiction website with just about everything you can imagine. and fanfiction.net is pretty self explanitory.
3yr
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Hatsune_Endou
Hatsune_EndouLv4

Wit this is not chinese fanfic ?

skiptail:And the fact that this even reached top 1 in power ranking truly baffles me. The story itself is pretty mediocre, starting with the stupid powerups, dumb down original characters that are supposedly shrewd in the og series. Reading this made me wonder if i was reading a chinese naruto fanfic a couple of times
3yr
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Akkikuro
AkkikuroLv13

Hmm i hear a lot of good things about Ao3 but i have never found anything good on it

Blackson:Maybe Bots boosting this. But more likely the quality of fanfiction on this site is very low and this one is somewhat decent. You can find a few gems here and there but on average this site fanfiction are of worse quality than ao3 or fanfiction net and the ranking system is pretty bad since there is no follow or favorite system. I nearly always forget I even have power stones.
3yr
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rizarima
rizarimaLv3

I don't really like other website like AoT or fanfiction. net cause they usually have very little chapter for fanfiction and I'm big reader for me less than 100 chapter is not reading better wait until 100 than have to wait for the cliffhanger

Blackson:Maybe Bots boosting this. But more likely the quality of fanfiction on this site is very low and this one is somewhat decent. You can find a few gems here and there but on average this site fanfiction are of worse quality than ao3 or fanfiction net and the ranking system is pretty bad since there is no follow or favorite system. I nearly always forget I even have power stones.
3yr
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AshGod7
AshGod7Lv4

true.

Akkikuro:Hmm i hear a lot of good things about Ao3 but i have never found anything good on it
2yr
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LittleDemon47
LittleDemon47Lv4

Same

Akkikuro:Hmm i hear a lot of good things about Ao3 but i have never found anything good on it
2yr
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LittleDemon47
LittleDemon47Lv4

that may be true but in webnovel chapters are 1k-2k words whereas in fanfiction atleast the ones which i read( i always search >=10k ) single chapter easily crosses 5k and there r some fics with monster releases every chapter (20+k) so i think if you want to read more search for more words in those site not chapters

rizarima:I don't really like other website like AoT or fanfiction. net cause they usually have very little chapter for fanfiction and I'm big reader for me less than 100 chapter is not reading better wait until 100 than have to wait for the cliffhanger
2yr
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Moltenblackbird
MoltenblackbirdLv1

only downside is the insane tag spam and no actual sorting system.

Tvirus:ao3 is called archive of our own and is a huge fanfiction website with just about everything you can imagine. and fanfiction.net is pretty self explanitory.
2yr
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LordAinzSama
LordAinzSamaLv5

Which website would you recommend to read good fanfic?

Blackson:Maybe Bots boosting this. But more likely the quality of fanfiction on this site is very low and this one is somewhat decent. You can find a few gems here and there but on average this site fanfiction are of worse quality than ao3 or fanfiction net and the ranking system is pretty bad since there is no follow or favorite system. I nearly always forget I even have power stones.
2yr
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Amigo_San
Amigo_SanLv1

I recommend you using royalroad.com. there are some quality fics there really cool ones after reading those you will also start to disdain the fics in the webnovel. there are also fanfiction of various franchise such as mcu fics, dc fics, some naruto fics, pokemon fics are specially popular there and are really good. original fics are specially good, easy to read and they are very entertaining

LordAinzSama:Which website would you recommend to read good fanfic?
2yr
BlueEyesWhiteCat
BlueEyesWhiteCatLv1

But many authors put hiatus of their original work on RoyalRoad and preferred to release them on webnovel. I havent check the fanfic one, but i'll try it out

Amigo_San:I recommend you using royalroad.com. there are some quality fics there really cool ones after reading those you will also start to disdain the fics in the webnovel. there are also fanfiction of various franchise such as mcu fics, dc fics, some naruto fics, pokemon fics are specially popular there and are really good. original fics are specially good, easy to read and they are very entertaining
2yr
SamB374
SamB374Lv1

AO3 is famous for their tags. If you like smol stories there are a lot of great oneshots, which you can find by filtering. AO3 has a completed filter so... FF also has a nice search/filtering system for finding beautiful stories, new and old. They also have an 'completed' tag, so you could try that together with a >length tag. I do agree with you however that most stories are shorter. They are fan-made and not every fan is an avid writer nor do all of them dedicate 80% of their time awake to writing... So take it with a grain of salt. There are lots of good stories hidden on these sites, so take up the challenge to try and find them. [img=recommend]

rizarima:I don't really like other website like AoT or fanfiction. net cause they usually have very little chapter for fanfiction and I'm big reader for me less than 100 chapter is not reading better wait until 100 than have to wait for the cliffhanger
2yr
Other Reviews
mikedanger
mikedangerLv5

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

3yr

Sekiyuutei_7
Sekiyuutei_7Lv4

hey author you better get him together with kurenai or your truly would be truly angry 😂 seriously kurenai for the win ....................

3yr
Philip_Junhi
Philip_JunhiLv1

No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!No Harem!!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!

3yr
GuestReader69
GuestReader69Lv4

This has been a fun read. Had to drop it after chapter 87 though. I would've dropped before that but I gave it a chance as author said it will make sense by chapter 87. Unfortunately, it just doesn't cut it. All the build up for MCs character and skills were wasted.

3yr
Joshua_Swan
Joshua_SwanLv14

There were some issues earlier with xinxia style talk but that ended quickly great up until the 80s chapter wise, unnecessary injuries for plot, unnecessary drama for plot, I suspect what happened is cannon diverted so much(a good thing imo) that Author wanted to try and bring it back.

3yr
Pavan1234
Pavan1234Lv5

Highlight of this fanfic is Mc's cheat, The Template System. (Hope author doesn't give too many character templates for Mc. 1 Character Template is Excellent. 3 Character Templates is very good. Anything more than 3 is bad) Plot premise, plot progression & Mc's characterization are just good. Character interactions are above average (Some are clichéd, some are cringy & very few are good) Hope author completes this fanfic. Hope more fanfics with this type of template system can be seen in future.

3yr
IZenusI
IZenusILv5

Really good story with great ideas. Unfortunately the main character suffers from missing braincells and young master syndrome. There are over 6 different situations within the current 30 chapters alone where he makes possibly the dumbest choice possible and then immediately afterwords goes oh no. Not only is the main character stupid but his plot armor is so strong that the whole world is made stupid. A situation that is very clearly a possible driving point and could be used to teach the MC to not be stupid? Oh no the third hokage and danzo are delusional for four years through 4 different obvious incidents. I would recommend reading this but you will lose braincells so be aware of that.

3yr
NeaCambelt
NeaCambeltLv1

POURQUOI Simuler ca mort et meme si c pour ton histoire au moins trouve une logique derriere leur mort frere sarutobi na jamais quitter le village alors c debile et c pareil pour danzo il reste toujour au village dans l'ombre franchement gros si inutile et ca se voit pour n'importe quel ninja de konoha que danzo et surotobi ne devrait pas etre la sur un champs de bataille le general et jamais sur la premier ligne

3yr
Aaron_Gepitulan
Aaron_GepitulanLv2

Dropped. Mc is likely missing some braincells. Characters doesn't act differently from their original personalities . Also I have problems about this 'Chinese novel' type of interaction between characters plus the fact that's not how they're personalities act. Characters feel like Empty husk.

2yr
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