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hunte_pro
hunte_proLv43yr
2021-10-04 02:54

well by honest opinion on this 1. the conversations seemed to be forced 2. I feel characters need more background development 3. need more in detail narration 4.try to take it in a slow pace(suggestion) 5.try to make changes realistic(suggestion)

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NotLastApril
NotLastAprilLv4

I agree with your take on this story

skiptail
skiptailLv4

And the fact that this even reached top 1 in power ranking truly baffles me. The story itself is pretty mediocre, starting with the stupid powerups, dumb down original characters that are supposedly shrewd in the og series. Reading this made me wonder if i was reading a chinese naruto fanfic a couple of times

Blackson
BlacksonLv1

Maybe Bots boosting this. But more likely the quality of fanfiction on this site is very low and this one is somewhat decent. You can find a few gems here and there but on average this site fanfiction are of worse quality than ao3 or fanfiction net and the ranking system is pretty bad since there is no follow or favorite system. I nearly always forget I even have power stones.

skiptail:And the fact that this even reached top 1 in power ranking truly baffles me. The story itself is pretty mediocre, starting with the stupid powerups, dumb down original characters that are supposedly shrewd in the og series. Reading this made me wonder if i was reading a chinese naruto fanfic a couple of times
D1cky_101
D1cky_101Lv14

Hey bro can you tell what website you talking about

Blackson:Maybe Bots boosting this. But more likely the quality of fanfiction on this site is very low and this one is somewhat decent. You can find a few gems here and there but on average this site fanfiction are of worse quality than ao3 or fanfiction net and the ranking system is pretty bad since there is no follow or favorite system. I nearly always forget I even have power stones.
Tvirus
TvirusLv14

ao3 is called archive of our own and is a huge fanfiction website with just about everything you can imagine. and fanfiction.net is pretty self explanitory.

D1cky_101:Hey bro can you tell what website you talking about
Movezbatch
MovezbatchLv4

Yeah, I was honestly shocked at how successfull this story was (and still is). Tried reading 4 chapters and had to force myself through them. I can't believe people like this thing and even pay him money on ptrn...

skiptail:And the fact that this even reached top 1 in power ranking truly baffles me. The story itself is pretty mediocre, starting with the stupid powerups, dumb down original characters that are supposedly shrewd in the og series. Reading this made me wonder if i was reading a chinese naruto fanfic a couple of times
D1cky_101
D1cky_101Lv14

Thanks man

Tvirus:ao3 is called archive of our own and is a huge fanfiction website with just about everything you can imagine. and fanfiction.net is pretty self explanitory.
Hatsune_Endou
Hatsune_EndouLv4

Wit this is not chinese fanfic ?

skiptail:And the fact that this even reached top 1 in power ranking truly baffles me. The story itself is pretty mediocre, starting with the stupid powerups, dumb down original characters that are supposedly shrewd in the og series. Reading this made me wonder if i was reading a chinese naruto fanfic a couple of times
Akkikuro
AkkikuroLv13

Hmm i hear a lot of good things about Ao3 but i have never found anything good on it

Blackson:Maybe Bots boosting this. But more likely the quality of fanfiction on this site is very low and this one is somewhat decent. You can find a few gems here and there but on average this site fanfiction are of worse quality than ao3 or fanfiction net and the ranking system is pretty bad since there is no follow or favorite system. I nearly always forget I even have power stones.
rizarima
rizarimaLv3

I don't really like other website like AoT or fanfiction. net cause they usually have very little chapter for fanfiction and I'm big reader for me less than 100 chapter is not reading better wait until 100 than have to wait for the cliffhanger

Blackson:Maybe Bots boosting this. But more likely the quality of fanfiction on this site is very low and this one is somewhat decent. You can find a few gems here and there but on average this site fanfiction are of worse quality than ao3 or fanfiction net and the ranking system is pretty bad since there is no follow or favorite system. I nearly always forget I even have power stones.
AshGod7
AshGod7Lv4

true.

Akkikuro:Hmm i hear a lot of good things about Ao3 but i have never found anything good on it
LittleDemon47
LittleDemon47Lv4

Same

Akkikuro:Hmm i hear a lot of good things about Ao3 but i have never found anything good on it
LittleDemon47
LittleDemon47Lv4

that may be true but in webnovel chapters are 1k-2k words whereas in fanfiction atleast the ones which i read( i always search >=10k ) single chapter easily crosses 5k and there r some fics with monster releases every chapter (20+k) so i think if you want to read more search for more words in those site not chapters

rizarima:I don't really like other website like AoT or fanfiction. net cause they usually have very little chapter for fanfiction and I'm big reader for me less than 100 chapter is not reading better wait until 100 than have to wait for the cliffhanger
Moltenblackbird
MoltenblackbirdLv1

only downside is the insane tag spam and no actual sorting system.

Tvirus:ao3 is called archive of our own and is a huge fanfiction website with just about everything you can imagine. and fanfiction.net is pretty self explanitory.
LordAinzSama
LordAinzSamaLv5

Which website would you recommend to read good fanfic?

Blackson:Maybe Bots boosting this. But more likely the quality of fanfiction on this site is very low and this one is somewhat decent. You can find a few gems here and there but on average this site fanfiction are of worse quality than ao3 or fanfiction net and the ranking system is pretty bad since there is no follow or favorite system. I nearly always forget I even have power stones.
Amigo_San
Amigo_SanLv1

I recommend you using royalroad.com. there are some quality fics there really cool ones after reading those you will also start to disdain the fics in the webnovel. there are also fanfiction of various franchise such as mcu fics, dc fics, some naruto fics, pokemon fics are specially popular there and are really good. original fics are specially good, easy to read and they are very entertaining

LordAinzSama:Which website would you recommend to read good fanfic?
BlueEyesWhiteCat
BlueEyesWhiteCatLv1

But many authors put hiatus of their original work on RoyalRoad and preferred to release them on webnovel. I havent check the fanfic one, but i'll try it out

Amigo_San:I recommend you using royalroad.com. there are some quality fics there really cool ones after reading those you will also start to disdain the fics in the webnovel. there are also fanfiction of various franchise such as mcu fics, dc fics, some naruto fics, pokemon fics are specially popular there and are really good. original fics are specially good, easy to read and they are very entertaining
SamB374
SamB374Lv1

AO3 is famous for their tags. If you like smol stories there are a lot of great oneshots, which you can find by filtering. AO3 has a completed filter so... FF also has a nice search/filtering system for finding beautiful stories, new and old. They also have an 'completed' tag, so you could try that together with a >length tag. I do agree with you however that most stories are shorter. They are fan-made and not every fan is an avid writer nor do all of them dedicate 80% of their time awake to writing... So take it with a grain of salt. There are lots of good stories hidden on these sites, so take up the challenge to try and find them. [img=recommend]

rizarima:I don't really like other website like AoT or fanfiction. net cause they usually have very little chapter for fanfiction and I'm big reader for me less than 100 chapter is not reading better wait until 100 than have to wait for the cliffhanger
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