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mikedanger
mikedangerLv53yr
2021-09-28 21:13

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

Naruto: The Template System

Navy_King
4.6
133 Chs

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bruh moment

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you again

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hoifzf
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lol ok dude 😆

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Phil_Morris
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i swear ive seen this review somwhere before were u the same guy

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Lol

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Omg why 😂

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Henry_Fong_3677
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build a custom in your brain

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PUERKO_Senpai
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XD

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I see IELTS grammar here _-_!

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Sekiyuutei_7
Sekiyuutei_7Lv4

hey author you better get him together with kurenai or your truly would be truly angry 😂 seriously kurenai for the win ....................

3yr

Philip_Junhi
Philip_JunhiLv1

No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!No Harem!!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!No Harem!!!!

3yr
hunte_pro
hunte_proLv4

well by honest opinion on this 1. the conversations seemed to be forced 2. I feel characters need more background development 3. need more in detail narration 4.try to take it in a slow pace(suggestion) 5.try to make changes realistic(suggestion)

3yr
GuestReader69
GuestReader69Lv4

This has been a fun read. Had to drop it after chapter 87 though. I would've dropped before that but I gave it a chance as author said it will make sense by chapter 87. Unfortunately, it just doesn't cut it. All the build up for MCs character and skills were wasted.

3yr
Joshua_Swan
Joshua_SwanLv14

There were some issues earlier with xinxia style talk but that ended quickly great up until the 80s chapter wise, unnecessary injuries for plot, unnecessary drama for plot, I suspect what happened is cannon diverted so much(a good thing imo) that Author wanted to try and bring it back.

3yr
Pavan1234
Pavan1234Lv5

Highlight of this fanfic is Mc's cheat, The Template System. (Hope author doesn't give too many character templates for Mc. 1 Character Template is Excellent. 3 Character Templates is very good. Anything more than 3 is bad) Plot premise, plot progression & Mc's characterization are just good. Character interactions are above average (Some are clichéd, some are cringy & very few are good) Hope author completes this fanfic. Hope more fanfics with this type of template system can be seen in future.

3yr
IZenusI
IZenusILv5

Really good story with great ideas. Unfortunately the main character suffers from missing braincells and young master syndrome. There are over 6 different situations within the current 30 chapters alone where he makes possibly the dumbest choice possible and then immediately afterwords goes oh no. Not only is the main character stupid but his plot armor is so strong that the whole world is made stupid. A situation that is very clearly a possible driving point and could be used to teach the MC to not be stupid? Oh no the third hokage and danzo are delusional for four years through 4 different obvious incidents. I would recommend reading this but you will lose braincells so be aware of that.

3yr
NeaCambelt
NeaCambeltLv1

POURQUOI Simuler ca mort et meme si c pour ton histoire au moins trouve une logique derriere leur mort frere sarutobi na jamais quitter le village alors c debile et c pareil pour danzo il reste toujour au village dans l'ombre franchement gros si inutile et ca se voit pour n'importe quel ninja de konoha que danzo et surotobi ne devrait pas etre la sur un champs de bataille le general et jamais sur la premier ligne

3yr
Aaron_Gepitulan
Aaron_GepitulanLv2

Dropped. Mc is likely missing some braincells. Characters doesn't act differently from their original personalities . Also I have problems about this 'Chinese novel' type of interaction between characters plus the fact that's not how they're personalities act. Characters feel like Empty husk.

2yr
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