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Pavan1234
Pavan1234Lv53yr
2021-10-03 18:48

Highlight of this fanfic is Mc's cheat, The Template System. (Hope author doesn't give too many character templates for Mc. 1 Character Template is Excellent. 3 Character Templates is very good. Anything more than 3 is bad) Plot premise, plot progression & Mc's characterization are just good. Character interactions are above average (Some are clichéd, some are cringy & very few are good) Hope author completes this fanfic. Hope more fanfics with this type of template system can be seen in future.

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KasiCair
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I am not gonna make my review so I am putting my opinion here. The story is... well, kinda okay-ish? Sigh, let me explain myself. Good points: The idea behind the story is great. The grammar is good. The author clearly has a talent for writing. And now what I find bad: 1) Chinese-ishness. - I am not racist, I swear - The story is so Chinese-sounding I honestly thought it was translation. It is a big turn-off for me. 2) The stupidity of the MC. By the 20th chapter, the MC transcended dumb and started to cultivate the Dao of Stupidity. Frankly, it seems as if the author was creating situations for the MC only to then make him act in the most moronic way possible. It gets tedious real quick for those who like to use their brain while reading. There are more issues with the story (like 5yo kids falling in love) but this is what bothers me the most. Overall, it is good story with nice idea and passable execution.

ZX79
ZX79Lv3

Yes we think about this novel as a translation because I feel I have read this novel

KasiCair:I am not gonna make my review so I am putting my opinion here. The story is... well, kinda okay-ish? Sigh, let me explain myself. Good points: The idea behind the story is great. The grammar is good. The author clearly has a talent for writing. And now what I find bad: 1) Chinese-ishness. - I am not racist, I swear - The story is so Chinese-sounding I honestly thought it was translation. It is a big turn-off for me. 2) The stupidity of the MC. By the 20th chapter, the MC transcended dumb and started to cultivate the Dao of Stupidity. Frankly, it seems as if the author was creating situations for the MC only to then make him act in the most moronic way possible. It gets tedious real quick for those who like to use their brain while reading. There are more issues with the story (like 5yo kids falling in love) but this is what bothers me the most. Overall, it is good story with nice idea and passable execution.
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