D1cky_101

where is this from?

death please

well kratos do more than hug

man you need fix your writting man all of this info we dont need to read it an we already know he will succed,maybe work wit your chararter man all tge charater it not fell real they are fell like npc

Man you dont need always emphaziz this dominace thing we are already know his chararter its just make it the writing like you know we fell like i know that already stop mentioning it already it make it repetitive

yeah its indonesia

well the buying power of the money is much stronger so yeah

man so much mistranslation its make me dont wan to sub the patr*on

well idont care mc will train or not the theme of this fanfiction is restaurant not some self insert for reder to fell good abut themselv

bro they are dont have live thats why they are mostly just bunch of horn kid that read so thet can SI themselve