Blackson

If you could post this story on a different site would be nice since I cant read it any longer on this website.

Maybe Bots boosting this. But more likely the quality of fanfiction on this site is very low and this one is somewhat decent. You can find a few gems here and there but on average this site fanfiction are of worse quality than ao3 or fanfiction net and the ranking system is pretty bad since there is no follow or favorite system. I nearly always forget I even have power stones.

I will be open it pretty good writing but the second I read that the main character has eaten the jacket fruit I lost all interest into it. The lame power with not many if any good applications. I'm not a fan of op character fic but on the other hand I'm not the biggest fan of the story like The Bite either. So the story just doesn't hit my personal taste. I read until chapter 8 but still cant find my self reading further. To all the people who enjoy this story have fun and the author continue writing it not a bad story just doesn't suit my taste.

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I just write something not very good at it. pretty instresting story etc. Thanks for posting etc. Will look in it soon again to finish reading.

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