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2024-01-03 11:32

In short: Don't bother with this fic unless you have literally nothing better to read. The longer I read, the harder it was to do so. There are multiple occasions where the author repeats paragraphs from a previous chapter or cuts sentences in half and space them out even though it should clearly be one paragraph. Besides that there are so many spelling and grammatical errors. Oh and let's not forget about 19/88 (a significant percentage) chapters just being announcements for other fics or polls for those fics. I think he started 3-4 other fics whilst writing this one and boy does it show. It feels like the uploads were rushed without a single proof read and it doesn't surprise me that it got dropped. I haven't read any of the other fics the author has posted pretty much because of the above reasons. If he treats this novel like that, who's to say the others won't be the same. I understand the author write fics just for fun, but the way he handled this was a disservice to the fic and themselves. A shame, really

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