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WebReaderPub
WebReaderPubLv142yr
2022-06-15 03:47

MC know future science, is an expert wizard, can copy all vampires powers he is thousands years old and the more he age the stronger he get, he is immortal and no one is as strong as him... where is the fun in this? he can do anything he want, nobody can stop him. this fic consist of him repairing to many cruel things that happened in twilight, but he do so without difficulties. i don't like such an over powered MC, they don't have any real development.

Hadrian Peverell in Twilight

Just_for_fun1997
3.7
91 Chs

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HauntedBySchoolwrk
HauntedBySchoolwrkLv4

Then why read it in the first place?! Just leave the novel alone why do you need to devalue it because of your selfish opinion?!

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WebReaderPub
WebReaderPubLv14

Not all review need to be positive. I told what for me were the prpblems with this novel. Moreover it's not like I gave him one star. So it isn't a meaningless and harsh review.

HauntedBySchoolwrk:Then why read it in the first place?! Just leave the novel alone why do you need to devalue it because of your selfish opinion?!
2yr
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freather09
freather09Lv3

After Harry Potter becomes the Master of Death. All stories become wish fullfillment.

1yr
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Domikers
DomikersLv3

Giving your opinion on something is literally what reviews are for. "Then why read it in the first place?!" well that's simple, if you haven't read it then you can't form an opinion it let alone leave a review. You don't devalue a fic because you post an honest review. Or "selfish opinion" as you put it.

HauntedBySchoolwrk:Then why read it in the first place?! Just leave the novel alone why do you need to devalue it because of your selfish opinion?!
1yr
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CopyPaste1
CopyPaste1Lv13

maybe the idea was good but has grammar errors. The biggest problem, the story need a good Edit and i mean a REALLY good Edit. .

3yr

Theroxis
TheroxisLv14

Hot Garbage! πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

3yr
me_and_me
me_and_meLv13

very interesting read, no overly blaring issues. keep it up. .

3yr
Demonzor
DemonzorLv14

Nothing good or special about the story it really boring the only thing that was kinda good about it was how he got there the writing is also terrible

2yr
Masterbox
MasterboxLv15

Good Story. Keep the updates comming, canΒ΄t wait to read more =)!!! I wish more HP/Twilight fics would be like yours.

3yr
FlammableFire
FlammableFireLv11

Reveal spoiler

2yr
MightBeGay
MightBeGayLv15

Its not horrible its just boring... the real problem this book has is horrible grammar, this book is in dire need of a good editor or a good edit

2yr
Cerberus47
Cerberus47Lv4

definitely one of the best hp/ twilight fanfic I have ever read so far. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

3yr
Alex_Boen
Alex_BoenLv14

Want moreπŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

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