Item: Hadrian Peverell in Twilight
Rating: 1.2

DemonzorLv142yr

2022-04-19 12:59

Nothing good or special about the story it really boring the only thing that was kinda good about it was how he got there the writing is also terrible

Hadrian Peverell in Twilight

Just_for_fun1997

3.7

90 Chs

Liked by 9 people

Replies6

Just_for_fun1997Author

Okay.........😑😑😑😑

2yr

Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

dude just use grammerly .... it's free... !!!😅

Just_for_fun1997:Okay.........😑😑😑😑

2yr

Just_for_fun1997Author

Can't use the laptop it's not working,I am writing on my phone on which using grammarly is pretty annoying.

Young_fruit_Smiley:dude just use grammerly .... it's free... !!!😅

2yr

Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

yeah it's pretty difficult on the phone.... sigh.. ** .

Just_for_fun1997:Can't use the laptop it's not working,I am writing on my phone on which using grammarly is pretty annoying.

2yr

Rimuru459Lv2

you should use the quill editing app. you can fix grammar errors and also paraphrase your sentence and also summarize. Remember the name is quill not quick as I also had done the same mistake at first.

Just_for_fun1997:Can't use the laptop it's not working,I am writing on my phone on which using grammarly is pretty annoying.

2yr

Note_EndLv3

Fico olhando assim, esse merda fala que é ruim, faz uma do sei grado e vê se fica melhor kkkkk

8mth

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maybe the idea was good but has grammar errors. The biggest problem, the story need a good Edit and i mean a REALLY good Edit. .

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very interesting read, no overly blaring issues. keep it up. .

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Good Story. Keep the updates comming, can´t wait to read more =)!!! I wish more HP/Twilight fics would be like yours.

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Reveal spoiler

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MightBeGayLv15

Its not horrible its just boring... the real problem this book has is horrible grammar, this book is in dire need of a good editor or a good edit

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definitely one of the best hp/ twilight fanfic I have ever read so far. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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