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Demonzor
DemonzorLv142yr
2022-04-19 12:59

Nothing good or special about the story it really boring the only thing that was kinda good about it was how he got there the writing is also terrible

Hadrian Peverell in Twilight

Just_for_fun1997
3.7
91 Chs

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Just_for_fun1997
Just_for_fun1997Author

Okay.........😑😑😑😑

2yr
Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

dude just use grammerly .... it's free... !!!😅

Just_for_fun1997:Okay.........😑😑😑😑
2yr
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Just_for_fun1997
Just_for_fun1997Author

Can't use the laptop it's not working,I am writing on my phone on which using grammarly is pretty annoying.

Young_fruit_Smiley:dude just use grammerly .... it's free... !!!😅
2yr
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Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

yeah it's pretty difficult on the phone.... sigh.. ** .

Just_for_fun1997:Can't use the laptop it's not working,I am writing on my phone on which using grammarly is pretty annoying.
2yr
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Rimuru459
Rimuru459Lv2

you should use the quill editing app. you can fix grammar errors and also paraphrase your sentence and also summarize. Remember the name is quill not quick as I also had done the same mistake at first.

Just_for_fun1997:Can't use the laptop it's not working,I am writing on my phone on which using grammarly is pretty annoying.
2yr
Note_End
Note_EndLv3

Fico olhando assim, esse merda fala que é ruim, faz uma do sei grado e vê se fica melhor kkkkk

1yr
Other Reviews
WebReaderPub
WebReaderPubLv14

MC know future science, is an expert wizard, can copy all vampires powers he is thousands years old and the more he age the stronger he get, he is immortal and no one is as strong as him... where is the fun in this? he can do anything he want, nobody can stop him. this fic consist of him repairing to many cruel things that happened in twilight, but he do so without difficulties. i don't like such an over powered MC, they don't have any real development.

2yr

CopyPaste1
CopyPaste1Lv13

maybe the idea was good but has grammar errors. The biggest problem, the story need a good Edit and i mean a REALLY good Edit. .

3yr
Theroxis
TheroxisLv14

Hot Garbage! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

3yr
me_and_me
me_and_meLv13

very interesting read, no overly blaring issues. keep it up. .

3yr
Masterbox
MasterboxLv15

Good Story. Keep the updates comming, can´t wait to read more =)!!! I wish more HP/Twilight fics would be like yours.

3yr
FlammableFire
FlammableFireLv11

Reveal spoiler

2yr
MightBeGay
MightBeGayLv15

Its not horrible its just boring... the real problem this book has is horrible grammar, this book is in dire need of a good editor or a good edit

2yr
Cerberus47
Cerberus47Lv4

definitely one of the best hp/ twilight fanfic I have ever read so far. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

3yr
Alex_Boen
Alex_BoenLv14

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3yr
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