freather09

I’d take the map. Or otherwise i’d feel like im always being spied on.

After Harry Potter becomes the Master of Death. All stories become wish fullfillment.

This story was well put together. I found it engaging and humorous. Although i probably enjoyed the author comments expressing their exasperation about how sex crazed their audience was. I did ultimately lose my interest in the story after the main character achieved equilibrium with his warring ‘other’ halves. He became a little to ‘OP’ imo. It kinda stopped the story being enjoyable. Also his werebear form being 4.6m tall was kinda silly, like charging into the enemy knocking them over like bowling pins. Hes not shoulder checking those 1.8m tall vampires no hes turkey slapping them. Anyways it was amusing.

Not a huge fan of this time travel arc. But i am really enjoying your book.