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Zero_Onze
Zero_OnzeLv32yr
2022-07-25 09:56

I almost started to read this , but then I saw who the author was and immediately dropped it, he is not very famous with continuing a story …………………………………………………………………………………………………..

Danmachi: Rise of The Rampart

ArifuretaForever
3.5
154 Chs

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OneeyedDaoist
OneeyedDaoistLv4

True

2yr
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Feruru
FeruruLv5

Ikr. He's like Jordinio but without skill and creativity

2yr
62
EaCalibur
EaCaliburLv5

Author deleted the review who objected why the fic's name was rise of Achilles when Achilles has nothing to do with this fanfic, but still changed the name to rise of the Rampart.

2yr
58
JustToMeme
JustToMemeLv4

i almost read it lol then i saw who the author is.

2yr
17
Fyrus
FyrusLv15

Immediately, the first two suggested books by the same author, also have Dropped in them

2yr
9
Ryofu
RyofuLv11

To be franc, most of his novel have an interesting setting but alwayse have a bad Harem xD.

2yr
17
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

Author has 20+ novels dropped...

2yr
15
Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5

for some reason he doesn't follow what he said he be doing in the dxd one we had a vote on the harem but he just went with his own choice after all the votes for extra members

Ryofu:To be franc, most of his novel have an interesting setting but alwayse have a bad Harem xD.
2yr
8
Hunter_Monarch132
Hunter_Monarch132Lv1

so he's famous for not continuing stories instead

1yr
2
Kufufufu
KufufufuLv4

True. Even when the story is quite interesting and goodd, he stilll drop it and doesn't continue. Though this is the longer story so far👍

1yr
4
Anti_Venom
Anti_VenomLv1

I have a feeling he will drop this on mc meets bell or one more chapter from meeting just a gut feeling idk.

1yr
2
Other Reviews
Muslim_man
Muslim_manLv4

Reveal spoiler

2yr

LunariaN
LunariaNLv5

1st review, and so far I love the story. MC is based on Geo Archon, he is part of an OC Familia with a Goddess I feel should've been part of Danmachi, imagine Athena is not part of a story that is about Gods and most of the Gods there are Greek Gods. . . a little question, since I think MC will aim to make his stats reach max 'SSS' before Leveling Up, what will be his Level when the story reach Canon? and what will be his Power Level (some adventurers can fight others with higher level)

2yr
_VIIX_
_VIIX_Lv11

Decent fanfic but I don't see the appeal 'YET'... Writing Quality: For grammar I'd give 4.5/5 because there aren't much mistakes. But I don't really know the scenes just don't flow for me during the dialogues. So that would be 2.5 on that. Story Development: This review has been made after catching up to Chapter 47. The story development so far has been lackluster tbh. The fights aren't that intense imo. I'd suggest the author to read/watch some Action/Thriller Piece. Everything seems just so dull that one would just skip over parts. So 3/5 Character Design: The most confusing thing for me in this novel. The only reason for the reincarnation tag is to justify the wiki knowledge. Aside from that the whole University student thing is just written to increase the word count. MC isn't mature. That's a lie. You'd be better off assuming the MC as a 5 y/o kid posing as a 12 y/o kid. His established background and his mentality just don't match. It's like he never grew up, neither he has the mature thinking of a uni student nor does he have the maturity of a kid that supposedly grew up as an orphan in the most dangerous part of orario. And that's not all, 47 chapters in and the MC hardly has a vague idea about his future goal but no effort put into actualising it. The side characters are okayish. While I'm glad that the author is giving focus to side chars, tbh I don't really care for slice of life chapters of the side chars. So 2/5 Updating Stability: ?/5 That's something that you can decide basing on the author's drop history World background: So far the best part of the fiction. I applaud the author for actually doing this part. I like the timeline. 5/5

2yr
Zekril
ZekrilLv4

I like the story but its too much detailed Every action will be told in what they do in every detail that will be in the end forgettin later as the story progress and because of that the story development is so slow.

2yr
Kenrio
KenrioLv11

A fic that start bashing a good character like hestia can only be trash

2yr
timelordkronos
timelordkronosLv12

the author is cruel,he makes multiples woman watch their lover die of old age just because he didnt want the mc to have his lifespan prolong.

2yr
Dagen
DagenLv15

Ok dude I was reading your other story but seeing you ghost your readers I am out and will post this on the other story also… it is a good story and if you are done writing in it just tell us. At least don’t ghost us… for someone who writes about being good in bed it seems you have problem finishing.

2yr
GenYase
GenYaseLv5

96 chapters in and the story only begins. Man talk about long prologue. Not even metioning MC is boring and the plot itself is average at best.

2yr
1stDrunkenImmortal
1stDrunkenImmortalLv14

I like the novels by this author. Its just that he droops a lot of them. I really hope he doesn’t drop this one because I do not see alot of good danmachi fanfiction on here.

2yr
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