JustToMeme

reading it now and describinhg it, why anal

it was on hent@ifoundry i think

It was good at first but then you started to write like an a.i, it's not a compliment btw. The characters became repetitive, and some don't feel like their character.

I'm sorry author but your work could've been good, but you ruined it with redundancy and you write like an A.I which turns off a lot of viewers.

This is just a weird book overall. Author repeats his paragraphs and also reuses them to describe something or someone.

Ngl, i read a few chapters and i think im gonna drop it. It's not bad, it just feels so redundant, the mc also is a cocky guy, the fights also feel dull. The name sucks too, alex lol. couldve just given him something generic.

true, he literally stole this

He still needs to throw the ball whenever an opponent wants to run for mc's homeplate tho? He starts in a crouching position to a throwing motion, basically pitching.

BRO, STOP WITH THIS SHIT

Yeah, i did not really like how toji was portrayed in the posted chapter. He was mildy obsessed just because of a single encounter.