I almost started to read this , but then I saw who the author was and immediately dropped it, he is not very famous with continuing a story …………………………………………………………………………………………………..

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Decent fanfic but I don't see the appeal 'YET'... Writing Quality: For grammar I'd give 4.5/5 because there aren't much mistakes. But I don't really know the scenes just don't flow for me during the dialogues. So that would be 2.5 on that. Story Development: This review has been made after catching up to Chapter 47. The story development so far has been lackluster tbh. The fights aren't that intense imo. I'd suggest the author to read/watch some Action/Thriller Piece. Everything seems just so dull that one would just skip over parts. So 3/5 Character Design: The most confusing thing for me in this novel. The only reason for the reincarnation tag is to justify the wiki knowledge. Aside from that the whole University student thing is just written to increase the word count. MC isn't mature. That's a lie. You'd be better off assuming the MC as a 5 y/o kid posing as a 12 y/o kid. His established background and his mentality just don't match. It's like he never grew up, neither he has the mature thinking of a uni student nor does he have the maturity of a kid that supposedly grew up as an orphan in the most dangerous part of orario. And that's not all, 47 chapters in and the MC hardly has a vague idea about his future goal but no effort put into actualising it. The side characters are okayish. While I'm glad that the author is giving focus to side chars, tbh I don't really care for slice of life chapters of the side chars. So 2/5 Updating Stability: ?/5 That's something that you can decide basing on the author's drop history World background: So far the best part of the fiction. I applaud the author for actually doing this part. I like the timeline. 5/5

I like the story but its too much detailed Every action will be told in what they do in every detail that will be in the end forgettin later as the story progress and because of that the story development is so slow.

A fic that start bashing a good character like hestia can only be trash

the author is cruel,he makes multiples woman watch their lover die of old age just because he didnt want the mc to have his lifespan prolong.

Ok dude I was reading your other story but seeing you ghost your readers I am out and will post this on the other story also… it is a good story and if you are done writing in it just tell us. At least don’t ghost us… for someone who writes about being good in bed it seems you have problem finishing.

96 chapters in and the story only begins. Man talk about long prologue. Not even metioning MC is boring and the plot itself is average at best.

I like the novels by this author. Its just that he droops a lot of them. I really hope he doesn’t drop this one because I do not see alot of good danmachi fanfiction on here.