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MyNameIsTea
MyNameIsTeaLv153yr
2021-11-23 04:41

I was super excited at seeing a multidimensional chat group, but immediately disappointed as this is almost an exact copy of akikan40's work. I was hoping for something that could make this stand out on its own and I understand since inspiration was obtained from that story, but inspiration and mimicry are two different things. I'm sorry to say that I can't give this very good rating for its poor grammar, story design (originality), the development (because again it is an imitation instead of an entirely new creation), the world background hasn't even changed much at all even with trying to use a different "start point" with a new Manga. Overall can't continue with this story in good conscious as I see it as a waste of time. Think of it like re-reading Frankenstein, you know what's going to happen, you've read the story before, it didn't change, why should you care more about it now reading it the second time?

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Riku_Wing
Riku_WingLv10

are you stupid akikan40 also copied from another novel.

Riku_Wing
Riku_WingLv10

akikan40 has long copied other novels from China. Also, please don't think that Akikan40 is original. He's a writer not as good as he used to be. He only thought about the Harem without thinking about the content of the story.

MyNameIsTea
MyNameIsTeaLv15

For those of you who like simply putting words in other people's mouths or not reading what is simply posted, reread what was my comment and then come back to this post. I simply said this was a copy of Akikan, never have I once stated that Akikan has ever not copied other novels or tropes. I have only stated that this is an almost exact copy of his work however. You can look at both of these stories and you can actually see the almost exact same parallels. I am a fan of multidimensional chat rooms and there are not many good ones. Now before the people who again can't seem to comprehend how reading what's written works, I am not saying Akikan's is "good" just making an observation. (Cue the butthurt people who don't know how to read and trolls). The reason why that was used as the example is because once again this story is an almost exact copy paste.

MyNameIsTea
MyNameIsTeaLv15

Don't throw around insults when you don't even properly read proper criticism. If you can't handle such a thing as a critical review then I don't think you should be a part of the commenting community because you're contributing to the toxic mass of people who don't understand what criticism/review/praise is, and confuse it with general insults and/or mindless awe.

Riku_Wing:are you stupid akikan40 also copied from another novel.
Orange_Car_Slave
Orange_Car_SlaveLv13

Bruh, then why don't you stop reading LN/WN if don't like imitation then stop reading dimensional chat or something except the very dimensional chat story. Since ya' know they just imitate the dimensional chat as well. Also your complaint about bad grammar I think you're stupider than 6 y/o kid because even a kid that just started learning English can understand the story. Btw what I mean in imitation is all dimensional chat system, not the stories created with it, THE SYSTEM.

Orange_Car_Slave
Orange_Car_SlaveLv13

- except the very dimensinal chat. *except the first dimensional chat*

ArdoAleister
ArdoAleisterLv3

Ah how nostalgic, i remember the days of coming home from school and reading the machine translated fanfics from Chinse writers. Like Unlimited Anime Works and Maidens' Grand Summoning. Good times, only now I'm amazed at the me who was able to read that stuff when the translations were so broken.

Riku_Wing:akikan40 has long copied other novels from China. Also, please don't think that Akikan40 is original. He's a writer not as good as he used to be. He only thought about the Harem without thinking about the content of the story.
Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5

bruh I've seen you comment on every review i seen so far are you the author friend or something?

Riku_Wing:are you stupid akikan40 also copied from another novel.
Kin_Feng
Kin_FengLv4

then can you list the things that are copied form akikan? I don't really see anything that is copied here, sure there is that one phase(?) in group chat novels where you feel like it's copied because of reading too many group chat novel. But for me there isn't really anything that's directly copy, iven if there is, it isn't really a parallel novel where it's copy pasted, his two world adventure are different from haru's, haru's is like ash catching women like pokemon(haru's latest adventure not his adventure from the start of the novel). btw i know there is wrong grammar (?), i don't really profread thing's i right(is this right?).

Kin_Feng
Kin_FengLv4

i might be misunderstanding you guys conversation, but if not this is my opinion, I've done whta you said, i read the 2 side by side.

Kin_Feng:then can you list the things that are copied form akikan? I don't really see anything that is copied here, sure there is that one phase(?) in group chat novels where you feel like it's copied because of reading too many group chat novel. But for me there isn't really anything that's directly copy, iven if there is, it isn't really a parallel novel where it's copy pasted, his two world adventure are different from haru's, haru's is like ash catching women like pokemon(haru's latest adventure not his adventure from the start of the novel). btw i know there is wrong grammar (?), i don't really profread thing's i right(is this right?).
Xue_Oue
Xue_OueLv3

can you recommend me some good chatroom novels

MyNameIsTea:For those of you who like simply putting words in other people's mouths or not reading what is simply posted, reread what was my comment and then come back to this post. I simply said this was a copy of Akikan, never have I once stated that Akikan has ever not copied other novels or tropes. I have only stated that this is an almost exact copy of his work however. You can look at both of these stories and you can actually see the almost exact same parallels. I am a fan of multidimensional chat rooms and there are not many good ones. Now before the people who again can't seem to comprehend how reading what's written works, I am not saying Akikan's is "good" just making an observation. (Cue the butthurt people who don't know how to read and trolls). The reason why that was used as the example is because once again this story is an almost exact copy paste.
Xue_Oue
Xue_OueLv3

can you recommend me some good chatroom novels

MyNameIsTea:For those of you who like simply putting words in other people's mouths or not reading what is simply posted, reread what was my comment and then come back to this post. I simply said this was a copy of Akikan, never have I once stated that Akikan has ever not copied other novels or tropes. I have only stated that this is an almost exact copy of his work however. You can look at both of these stories and you can actually see the almost exact same parallels. I am a fan of multidimensional chat rooms and there are not many good ones. Now before the people who again can't seem to comprehend how reading what's written works, I am not saying Akikan's is "good" just making an observation. (Cue the butthurt people who don't know how to read and trolls). The reason why that was used as the example is because once again this story is an almost exact copy paste.
Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv11

Omni-dimensional chat group, dimensional chat group of creation and destruction, Super Dimensional Guild etc, there are quite a few good ones out there but it depends heavily on what you prefer in an mc, the three I mentioned have a varied cast and decent upload rate besides the last one. (Super Dimensional Guild has 2051 easily accessed chapters, 2107 if you use google translate and the chapters beyond that seem to be locked away somewhere, even looking through CN websites it's virtually impossible to find chapters beyond 2107.)

Xue_Oue:can you recommend me some good chatroom novels
Kono_phineas_da
Kono_phineas_daLv2

Such a fact that sh** harem completely ruined the story at first it was great like the akame ga kill arc that was so good and made me fall in love with the story especially the way he was actually cool and stunted on night raid if every mission was as good as the few before the harem really came I wouldn’t mind but as the story went on it became just about the harem and the other stuff was boring as well like in hunter hunter I barely even cared about the actual world because it was just about shinobu and Charlotte and even then I didn’t care because each chapter had him with different girls everytime even random girls we ain’t care about 🤦🏾‍♂️

Riku_Wing:akikan40 has long copied other novels from China. Also, please don't think that Akikan40 is original. He's a writer not as good as he used to be. He only thought about the Harem without thinking about the content of the story.
HellBoy_2057
HellBoy_2057Lv4

Yeah, i also wonder how i was able to read all those novels then must have been the power of youth!!

ArdoAleister:Ah how nostalgic, i remember the days of coming home from school and reading the machine translated fanfics from Chinse writers. Like Unlimited Anime Works and Maidens' Grand Summoning. Good times, only now I'm amazed at the me who was able to read that stuff when the translations were so broken.
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