I tried I really do but it's just not my cup of tea. Personally I believe that fanfic should not be retelling of the original plot just with extra person. He is doing whatever dumbles told him to do and babysit the plot No offense but it's not for me but great writing quality tho
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LIKEif the review of this site had to be done after reading the story completely, it would make no sense. since many of them make it impossible... yours as an example