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Reign_BloodarkLv53yr
2021-10-13 09:07

Story overall is not that bad but it just doesnt suit me so take what I say here with assumption that im a bit biased. Firstly the MC, his personality just ticks me off. He is constantly having mood swings, some parts act like gary stue mr perfect then swing to triggered raging salty child. A lot of what feels like forced drama and characters behaving wildly. Then the "romance" dear lord. this got as muvh drama as the soap operas middle aged housewife watches to waste their time, its simply annoying, distracting from the main attraction point of this fic which is world exploration, "special" magic and power tripping munchkinnery. instead we are shown annoying heroine triggering the mc and then making up and snogging. This gets repeated every few chapter whenever there is space for this bs. even during serious moments for action and adventure. its just repetitive, boring ans annoying. as i said, im probably biased. Just went through entire fic getting triggered by this heroine and her interaction with MC.

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