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LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv123yr
2021-09-03 09:45

Wow look at me, I am 10000 years old and have the maturity of an infant. Celebrate me for I have lived for so long without gaining anything. Pro Tipp for prospective writers: Don't create an MC you can't understand or even imagine. Stay with what you know and build up from there. Even 90 short years are enough for humans to understand that arrogance and pettiness doesn't contribute to conflict resolution.

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Cpecific
CpecificLv10

Old ancestor of random chinese sect would disagree

GrandpaPeng
GrandpaPengLv4

Not in China.

TheAncientOnell
TheAncientOnellLv6

Dude one star only for that something wrong with your brain!!!

Demonmaster
DemonmasterLv3

Really did you even read 20 chapters, since in 20 chapters it explains, shows, and flesh’s out the MC. Though you gotta keep in mind that cultivaters spend like 99.9% of their time cultivating, training, and traveling. Though and other times they just spend their time relaxing and eating, well that’s what I understand so instead of saying he has a mindset of a 100000 year old it’s better to say he has a mindset of a 40-50 year old. Though if you have this kind of mindset I don’t understand how you can read most novels on this website. 🤨

LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv12

No sir, please reread the first few chapters. The MC explicitly states that he is not one of those detached cultivators. He is a very well traveled and experienced person, who enjoys watching and experiencing new worlds. If he had been a holy son of some sect who hadn't left seclusion for centuries I would not have complained about it.

Demonmaster:Really did you even read 20 chapters, since in 20 chapters it explains, shows, and flesh’s out the MC. Though you gotta keep in mind that cultivaters spend like 99.9% of their time cultivating, training, and traveling. Though and other times they just spend their time relaxing and eating, well that’s what I understand so instead of saying he has a mindset of a 100000 year old it’s better to say he has a mindset of a 40-50 year old. Though if you have this kind of mindset I don’t understand how you can read most novels on this website. 🤨
LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv12

Thank you for being a kind and considerate human being. This is not the only reason, the plot is generic and the style is nothing to write home about either. If a novel has nothing to stand out but a massive flaw in the introduction and subsequent the rest of the story I feel justified to vote in such a fashion.

TheAncientOnell:Dude one star only for that something wrong with your brain!!!
Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv11

Wow you speak about maturity when you have none... Every persons character is different, there are some 70+ gradpas that act like teenagers so why can't there be chill cultivators in a novel? Also nothing said by MC about his character and experiences contradicts each other so his way of acting is totaly normal for me.

AAA001
AAA001Lv10

i already read it all 20 chapter and read it to 100 chapter of mtl, but ib dont find out how childish this mc, please enlight me from your perspectif.

SujayPatra
SujayPatraLv10

90 short years are for normal human who grows old with time. not immortal or cultivators. in fantasy cultivation 90 years is not even 9years for them. Thats how are Chinese novels are written but still i dont understand how MC acts childish? MC likes to experience/explore many kind of worlds in his previous life. So in my opinion if MC is acting like a 17year boy in a 17yrs old current body its very fitting for the story. i dont want a Kid to act like 10000years old GrandPa. MC should act like a kid when he has a Kids body and act like a Adult when he has a Adult body its simple. Otherwise there is no point to MC enjoying different kind of lives in many different worlds. Act according to the situation.

lemonlemon
lemonlemonLv1

U just probably commented on a wrong novel dude

Demonmaster
DemonmasterLv3

I reread and came to a conclusion it’s probably because cultivators have a strong will and will stay true to whatever they believe in so when visited other worlds he only visited for fun and he was strong enough that whatever problem he faced he could deal with it one way or another (force). So therefore even though he is more mature he probably is not that mature.

LightningCatThief:No sir, please reread the first few chapters. The MC explicitly states that he is not one of those detached cultivators. He is a very well traveled and experienced person, who enjoys watching and experiencing new worlds. If he had been a holy son of some sect who hadn't left seclusion for centuries I would not have complained about it.
Alexander_Ronald
Alexander_RonaldLv2

Nah, the way MC acts are fine by me and the introduction doesn't have any massive flaw either. You are the weird one for giving one star for absolutely fine novel

Bored_Monster
Bored_MonsterLv5

Don't forget the overly detailed and gross comments on legs🤮

KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv4

these comments reminded me of how low the webnovel readers standards are, and considering this app/site is a branch of a chinese website it doesn't really surprise me by the amount of chinese novels here.

Hundred_Lilies
Hundred_LiliesLv14

Haven't even tried reading this novel after reading your review. I have the same dislike/pet peeve as you when it comes to novels with adult and old-aged main characters where their maturity doesn't reflect their age. It's too contradictory and pretty aggravating to read. Mainly because the lack of maturity is often used as a tool to force a situation in the novel to become funny - but it isn't funny and feels forced and superficial instead. At least in my opinion. Aside from that, it baffles me to no end that readers can't even comment on a dislike without getting attacked on a personal level. That's just wrong on so many levels. Anyway, here's to disliking immature MCs and different tastes without personal insults!🍻

ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5

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LightningCatThief:Thank you for being a kind and considerate human being. This is not the only reason, the plot is generic and the style is nothing to write home about either. If a novel has nothing to stand out but a massive flaw in the introduction and subsequent the rest of the story I feel justified to vote in such a fashion.
Royston_Daniel
Royston_DanielLv3

rules are weird it's better than some culivation but still wierd like are you allowed to fight soul beasts or not are you allowed to fight people or not ok so you steal from someone else it's belongs to you now and are a rightful imaginary owner someone does it to you they are the worst many soldiers died and some nearly died protecting him give a few gifts to them for it how generous and great mc and some people commenting this is a comment section it is made for criticizing just because some things about the novel are likeable and readable doesn't mean it doesn't have flaws and is perfect oh wow a comment saying to force others to like everything wow I just love the novel now

GhettoGodzilla
GhettoGodzillaLv11

Did we read different novels? I feel that compared to other cultivation novels, Wang Che is very mature. He is calm and collected without being edgy, he is not very arrogant or shameless, so I dont know where you got the feeling that he immature? Although I have only read until around chapter 70, so maybe he changes?

Jeremiah_Bora
Jeremiah_BoraLv1

Dude is ur brain damaged?

Jims_Rid
Jims_RidLv4

Believe me, we tried to raise our standards but it's not fun. You only get to have fun with those gold novels and there are only a few of them. Lowering standards allows us enlarge the coverage for novels we can have fun with. But that doesn't mean that we tolerate just about anything. If it becomes repetitive, then it's no longer fun

KING_IN_YELLOW:these comments reminded me of how low the webnovel readers standards are, and considering this app/site is a branch of a chinese website it doesn't really surprise me by the amount of chinese novels here.
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LordInsanity
LordInsanityLv5

Wow, a quality novel, well atleast compared to the utter sub-human trash available so far. MC is an expert who died from tribulation and reincarnated as a young man in a new world. Due to the laws (not governmental laws, but spiritual/magical stuff) of the world he's in, he can't personally cultivate using the methods from his former world. Therefore, he must rely on his soul beast to cultivate, this is not an original idea, his soul beast is well known trash-tier, but with his OP past-life methods, it becomes stronger. The way it's portrayed so far is what grabs my attention, there's young masters, but they don't act like arrogant d-bags. The author took the extra step to explain the feelings of side-characters to make them different then the "Oh so you're trash, hahaha". If you read it, you can see the difference compared to the mass produced garbage. The world setting is pretty standard, yet the author takes the time to explain it, rather then giving us a cookie cutter template that we always see in other novels. He doesn't explain the world, but the differences in power systems between his former world and current. The MC is an expert, so don't expect any character development. He's lived a full life already. I haven't seen those cliché's where everyone mocks him on the daily, the attitudes and designs of other characters are different then regular novels. In conclusion, there's not much difference so far (Chapter 20) with this novel and others, all though the genre of pets is cookie cutter, instead of taking it straight out of the package like other novels, the author has decided to explain things and increase the depths of other things. Then again this is a C20 review, who knows if he goes full china #1 later.

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