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HaoShu
HaoShuAuthor3yr
2021-07-08 21:12

A newbie at creating by myself if you like the story you can definitely like and vote. The story will give you the joy of having a daughter and the emotional bonding and love they share. Definitely will not make you cry but touch your heart. [img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp]

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BT_Akash_Chavan
BT_Akash_ChavanLv1

Fantastic book very nice bro keep it up

Empyrium
EmpyriumLv15

For a newbie writer you novel is quiet good, just hope mc won't be as arrogant as typical chinese mc. The start s really fast paced, could be a bit slower but overall your novel has potential, just a few grammer mistakes

HaoShu
HaoShuAuthor

never buddy no arrogance at all you can be the witness here

Empyrium:For a newbie writer you novel is quiet good, just hope mc won't be as arrogant as typical chinese mc. The start s really fast paced, could be a bit slower but overall your novel has potential, just a few grammer mistakes
HaoShu
HaoShuAuthor

if you say so buddy we will lower the pace

Empyrium:For a newbie writer you novel is quiet good, just hope mc won't be as arrogant as typical chinese mc. The start s really fast paced, could be a bit slower but overall your novel has potential, just a few grammer mistakes
LordFangYuan
LordFangYuanLv4

win..cest?

HaoShu:if you say so buddy we will lower the pace
shashank_panthri
shashank_panthriLv1

my man asking the important questions

LordFangYuan:win..cest?
Ayanokoji_Kiyopon
Ayanokoji_KiyoponLv2

So, in this harem is one where he has multiple love interests but will end up with one only?

HaoShu
HaoShuAuthor

no, it's harm so he will have many women

Ayanokoji_Kiyopon:So, in this harem is one where he has multiple love interests but will end up with one only?
Ayanokoji_Kiyopon
Ayanokoji_KiyoponLv2

good~

HaoShu:no, it's harm so he will have many women
ExistentialMonarch
ExistentialMonarchLv14

I just started reading it and like it. The only thing that it lacks from my point of view are the character discriptions like how they look, their hair colour etc

HaoShu
HaoShuAuthor

will sure try to overcome it

ExistentialMonarch:I just started reading it and like it. The only thing that it lacks from my point of view are the character discriptions like how they look, their hair colour etc
HaruRacharu
HaruRacharuLv11

is it only me or the cover looks like clannad

ByteZeroOne
ByteZeroOneLv14

can you pls tell me if there is, or would be an a*ult scenes with his wives?

HaoShu
HaoShuAuthor

no adult scenes it is not r18[img=recommend][img=recommend]

ByteZeroOne:can you pls tell me if there is, or would be an a*ult scenes with his wives?
ByteZeroOne
ByteZeroOneLv14

thank you for answer

HaoShu:no adult scenes it is not r18[img=recommend][img=recommend]
HaoShu
HaoShuAuthor

hope u won't mind giving it a try, tho I have started editing all over again due to many grammatical mistakes[img=recommend]

ByteZeroOne:thank you for answer
ByteZeroOne
ByteZeroOneLv14

nah, I don't really like reading this scenes, but without it, it's kinda bland for me, don't have anything against your work. maybe later my tastes would change and I would try, goodbye!

HaoShu:hope u won't mind giving it a try, tho I have started editing all over again due to many grammatical mistakes[img=recommend]
HaoShu
HaoShuAuthor

ohh

ByteZeroOne:nah, I don't really like reading this scenes, but without it, it's kinda bland for me, don't have anything against your work. maybe later my tastes would change and I would try, goodbye!
ByteZeroOne
ByteZeroOneLv14

if you dont understand why i didn't like this scenes but wouln't read without them, the answer is romance - there is no better individual character development and romantic development for couple, scene, if done right, it's just what i found for me after readings many books

HaoShu:ohh
HaoShu
HaoShuAuthor

well I know the book has not good enough romance in first 50 chaps,but later it has been developed, u can try it till the free chaps, if u still don't like then ig I can only sigh 😸

ByteZeroOne:if you dont understand why i didn't like this scenes but wouln't read without them, the answer is romance - there is no better individual character development and romantic development for couple, scene, if done right, it's just what i found for me after readings many books
Other Reviews
Suiyan
SuiyanLv12

I took my time to finally read it, as I said I would before. Well, take this review with a grain of salt since I'm someone who doesn't like harem stories. Yes, my first issue is with the 'all girls are falling for MC' problem. That truly irritates me, but some people might like it. What about the mc's previous life friends? So far, only five years passed on Earth, right? How come only women keep appearing? Other than you typical villain men, the mc doesn't have a single friend of the same genre. It's all women, women, and more women. Is that even possible? At the very least, that was the case until the chapter I stopped reading. What about his real wife? Like, she is happy he came back... but that is all she feels... It's like she simply doesn't care at all about what happened in the last five years he was gone. It's all 'I'm happy he is back.' 'everything will be fine now that he is back' those are basically the only thoughts in her head. I thought she was supposed to be a much stronger woman after living the challenges of raising a kid five years alone. Suddenly, she became a broken doll out of nowhere. Last but not least, the descriptions. I truly can't emphasize with overly descriptive stories. I don't need to know how beautiful or run-down a place is to its minimal details. All I need to know is that it looks bad or good. Unless the description of a place or things like that is necessary for the story itself, all those detail are completely meaningless. I literally jumped at least 30 to 40% of the paragraphs in the chapters I read because I already knew that it was all a bunch of unnecessary words. I want to read a story, not an architecture project. Give, me, a, story! Of course, there were good points in the story too: Writing quality. It is definitely much better than my own books. Hahaha! I have nothing to complain in this department. Updates are fine too. They are consistent as far as I can see. This is definitely the point of a good author. The story itself had potential, at least when I read the synopsis. It really caught my eye... until the problems I mentioned appeared. PS: This last part is basically a personal taste. It has nothing to do with the author or the story. Anyway, the thing about Chinese names everywhere, including the cultivation world the MC came from. I mean, come on! What are the chances that the guy was Chinese and everyone in his world were all Chinese? The chances are ridiculously low, but that's exactly what happens. Remember, chances wise, that shouldn't be the case at all. As I said, this is just a personal taste. It has nothing to do with the story. If the author wishes that every single stone has a Chinese origin, it is fine.

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