Empyrium

You got some anger issues? Also, to make a thought like: "This is dangerous you shouldnt do it" takes like a second. It is explained longer here, because we, as readers dont know it yet and it gives us information about the world. You really think he sat down, opened a book and recalled his old notes? Man, sometimes its just better to say nothing.

lot of mistakes in this chapter

thats so annoying. Will drop the book if that happens ngl

real obsidian is very sharp but can shatter really fast. But no idea how it is in the novel

Urgh, good start, bad naming sense already. Am very afraid of what name his child will get

That is new

All good, read so far because the power mc got are good. Also your writing style is pretty nice. Recommended it few people I know, maybe its more for them.

Ngl, I dont like this at all. Feels weird to me where this is going. I came expecting a villain story and got a pervert couple, some crazy mentally ill people. Like is there anyone normal in this story lol

Nah can we please stop with these pathetic mcs for once?

Chapters need a bit of editing. Some mistakes here and there, sentence structure, wrong words etc