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Jack_Priper
Jack_PriperLv63yr
2022-01-11 22:18

(1+3+1+3+2)/5=2 The author's trying to put a novel together and mixing troupes from this and other genres. that's alright. and the author tries to be a chill dude who keeps in touch with his work and new comers. so being honestly critical starts to feel a little hard. The editing honestly hurts. for any defenders of this English; alright, we grew up with a completely different version of English. This doesn't match my experience with either American, British, Australian English or any other. I'm slightly confused as the few replies to my comments from the author led to me believing that he/she actually doesn't have a problem with English. side note if anyone is interested in a bit of reality. a woman who deals with stress for any amount of time wilts. The same goes for men. in other words they lose their aesthetic and raw sexual appeal. For a story and a fantasy's sake, i can see and mostly agree that it doesn't matter. I have however seen this so much that I'm now tired of it. stay healthy folks.

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Jack_Priper
Jack_PriperLv6

and I give up. there is SO MUCH filler content. oh, and according to the book time, by chapter 300,i doubt we've gone through any more than half a week. so, maybe three days passed in the novel? cliches of the leads being the definition of beauty and appeal (fine the mc did that). and an oversaturation of moments where the ladies feel like they're full of honey due to any bit of attention from the mc

EnderPL
EnderPLLv6

It was a painful experience. At first the situations are almost copied from other novels. The bad characters, young masters or even events. The writing or translation is simply bad. I can’t say it’s terrible as most of the chapters are fillers so short that you can get annoyed. There maybe 30 chapters from 200 that I read to progress the story. Other thing! How much cry can you put in the story?! Each chapter someone is shedding tears! Annoying! The mc iq is at the level of a rock and there os so many inconsistencies! Like forgets his powers and acts like a mortal! I would give the overall a solid 2 and totally agree with this review.

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Suiyan
SuiyanLv12

I took my time to finally read it, as I said I would before. Well, take this review with a grain of salt since I'm someone who doesn't like harem stories. Yes, my first issue is with the 'all girls are falling for MC' problem. That truly irritates me, but some people might like it. What about the mc's previous life friends? So far, only five years passed on Earth, right? How come only women keep appearing? Other than you typical villain men, the mc doesn't have a single friend of the same genre. It's all women, women, and more women. Is that even possible? At the very least, that was the case until the chapter I stopped reading. What about his real wife? Like, she is happy he came back... but that is all she feels... It's like she simply doesn't care at all about what happened in the last five years he was gone. It's all 'I'm happy he is back.' 'everything will be fine now that he is back' those are basically the only thoughts in her head. I thought she was supposed to be a much stronger woman after living the challenges of raising a kid five years alone. Suddenly, she became a broken doll out of nowhere. Last but not least, the descriptions. I truly can't emphasize with overly descriptive stories. I don't need to know how beautiful or run-down a place is to its minimal details. All I need to know is that it looks bad or good. Unless the description of a place or things like that is necessary for the story itself, all those detail are completely meaningless. I literally jumped at least 30 to 40% of the paragraphs in the chapters I read because I already knew that it was all a bunch of unnecessary words. I want to read a story, not an architecture project. Give, me, a, story! Of course, there were good points in the story too: Writing quality. It is definitely much better than my own books. Hahaha! I have nothing to complain in this department. Updates are fine too. They are consistent as far as I can see. This is definitely the point of a good author. The story itself had potential, at least when I read the synopsis. It really caught my eye... until the problems I mentioned appeared. PS: This last part is basically a personal taste. It has nothing to do with the author or the story. Anyway, the thing about Chinese names everywhere, including the cultivation world the MC came from. I mean, come on! What are the chances that the guy was Chinese and everyone in his world were all Chinese? The chances are ridiculously low, but that's exactly what happens. Remember, chances wise, that shouldn't be the case at all. As I said, this is just a personal taste. It has nothing to do with the story. If the author wishes that every single stone has a Chinese origin, it is fine.

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