(1+3+1+3+2)/5=2 The author's trying to put a novel together and mixing troupes from this and other genres. that's alright. and the author tries to be a chill dude who keeps in touch with his work and new comers. so being honestly critical starts to feel a little hard. The editing honestly hurts. for any defenders of this English; alright, we grew up with a completely different version of English. This doesn't match my experience with either American, British, Australian English or any other. I'm slightly confused as the few replies to my comments from the author led to me believing that he/she actually doesn't have a problem with English. side note if anyone is interested in a bit of reality. a woman who deals with stress for any amount of time wilts. The same goes for men. in other words they lose their aesthetic and raw sexual appeal. For a story and a fantasy's sake, i can see and mostly agree that it doesn't matter. I have however seen this so much that I'm now tired of it. stay healthy folks.
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LIKEand I give up. there is SO MUCH filler content. oh, and according to the book time, by chapter 300,i doubt we've gone through any more than half a week. so, maybe three days passed in the novel? cliches of the leads being the definition of beauty and appeal (fine the mc did that). and an oversaturation of moments where the ladies feel like they're full of honey due to any bit of attention from the mc
It was a painful experience. At first the situations are almost copied from other novels. The bad characters, young masters or even events. The writing or translation is simply bad. I can’t say it’s terrible as most of the chapters are fillers so short that you can get annoyed. There maybe 30 chapters from 200 that I read to progress the story. Other thing! How much cry can you put in the story?! Each chapter someone is shedding tears! Annoying! The mc iq is at the level of a rock and there os so many inconsistencies! Like forgets his powers and acts like a mortal! I would give the overall a solid 2 and totally agree with this review.