lets start not from 1 st position but from last world background- interesting idea, putting a mage in cultivation world and lets see how he will live and possibly thrive, 5 stars just for that update stability- new reader here, i think its stable so 5 character design, thats the point when the story starting to go downhill, like many novels here character is like from wood, with some epiaodes of emotions, that are explained in brutally blunt way. But i think you.can get used to this. story development- sometimes generic sometimes not, average writing quality- for me the worst art of book, I can see potential in this story, but it just geta worse with all this explaining obvious thinks. Second, you can find many repeadly used words sometimes every 2 sentences you can see repeditions of previous sentence, for me its absolute no no for people who dont expect good quality and logic in story, interesting idea for a book is just not enought for me.
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