I already understood how the story will be from the moment there were 2 chapters about an unnecessary fight...,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Liked by 13 people
LIKE
Which part? It might be a filler or immersive experience the readers should learn that the author thought of. But if you understood the story, can you tell me how did it go?
mc is a 1 millennium magician, he has strength, he lived in a world "ruled by force" but he doesn't even think about hiding that he doesn't know anything about the world, maybe there is something like a magic to read/erase thoughts or memories? thus removing these "boring misunderstandings" that the mc gets into? like when he bumps into the supposed young master... he just had to erase his memory there and leave, so you can imagine the whole story (full of slaps in the face). and let's face it... from what I've read, the writing and character development is not the best for unnecessary thoughts (because the next line already demonstrates this thought)
you are wrong though... i wont be checking this reply so ignore the errors. the whole story goes beyond that. it is connected with the cosmos. it was just that the beginning chapters was portrayed with some useless things and unnecessary decisions. here's the flow... he was transported in another world with his body changed back to his youth. with just right there, it is obvious that there were changes in his body. so his mind was kind of unstable with doing this and that. and of course i didnt write it that the readers would speculate it. what kind of story that feeds everything to the readers? then he stumbled upon with a female that was from the upper heaven. she was betrayed and he healed her and thus the female helped him for some information he doesnt know. but later on, she needs to leave as they found the friend of the female sick. so she needs to leave and help her. and again the mc was alone but he stumbled upon with sects that are fighting for some reason. he helped them to settle and yeah, it connects with other people's businesses. and few events happen where he express his personal interests then later on when he got hia cultivation higher, he noticed some complications his passive abilities made and one of it was his previous state where he acts like a child. so he fixed it partially using half a year of his time. i guess your imagination was degenerated from reading repeating plot. at least mine has a decent plot and decent world building. just ignore the okayish writing. im still working on it. but i just want to prove that what think the plot is, is entirely wrong. and what i just mentioned wasnt even 1/4 of the published chapters
well, I'll try to read more ahead so that at least I can give a true evaluation. if I skip the initial chapters to the point where he is more mature would I miss any essential information? because this kind of "Chinese" plot really got boring for me, because I've read literally hundreds in this style.
sure, no hard feelings. I just don't feel good about being compared to generic plots. I guess you could say that the beginning chapters were like that, but, I totally changed the flow, intentionally as it was needed, about in chapters more ahead. by the way, I don't really know about Chinese plot since the only novel I have read that was totally a Chinese one was Reversed Insanity. I don't know about others since I do really think that Chinese novels have some kind of copy-revise-paste styles.
