Item: A Loners Creations
Rating: 5
Author: Carcosa_Sensei

Carcosa_SenseiAuthor3yr

2021-06-06 06:32

I am the True-god of creation who created the daughter of nothingness my existence is abstract so picture me however you like but because I made the world of loner I shall shamelessly give myself a 5-star review P.S this project actually has story already planned out as far as volume 1 please do enjoy.

A Loners Creations

Carcosa_Sensei

4.4

33 Chs

Liked by 36 people

Replies26

ThePotatoDaoLv4

So, it's you that let your daughter be sad? If yes, then you shall receive punishment by the infinite power of potatoes.

3yr

Carcosa_SenseiAuthor

I created my daughter who created everything so technically I made everything your potatoes have no power over me bow before your creator creator.

ThePotatoDao:So, it's you that let your daughter be sad? If yes, then you shall receive punishment by the infinite power of potatoes.

3yr

ThePotatoDaoLv4

That still doesn't change the fact that you're a bad father

Carcosa_Sensei:I created my daughter who created everything so technically I made everything your potatoes have no power over me bow before your creator creator.

3yr

Carcosa_SenseiAuthor

Fair point

ThePotatoDao:That still doesn't change the fact that you're a bad father

3yr

luisferLv6

What makes this story have Tragedy?

3yr

flea23Lv14

somebody ate the last doughnut

luisfer:What makes this story have Tragedy?

3yr

DarkConquerorPRLv13

flea23:somebody ate the last doughnut

3yr

ThePotatoDaoLv4

That's more horror or fighting to dead than tragedy

flea23:somebody ate the last doughnut

3yr

KutuLv4

Jokes on you, I have non-existence physiology and essence of the demiurge. I can punish you as I wish.

Carcosa_Sensei:I created my daughter who created everything so technically I made everything your potatoes have no power over me bow before your creator creator.

3yr

SirPewbsAlotLv4

the bean god disregards your existence... "disintegrates you"

Carcosa_Sensei:I created my daughter who created everything so technically I made everything your potatoes have no power over me bow before your creator creator.

3yr

Carcosa_SenseiAuthor

I would love to see you try my power are beyond boudless

Kutu:Jokes on you, I have non-existence physiology and essence of the demiurge. I can punish you as I wish.

3yr

Carcosa_SenseiAuthor

I would love to see you try to disintegrate the nothing itself I am everywhere but nowhere so where will you aim with the disintegration bean

SirPewbsAlot:the bean god disregards your existence... "disintegrates you"

3yr

SirPewbsAlotLv4

HAHAHHAHA... how laughable you're lucky the bean god is benevolent for as soon as he wakes up we would all be gone/ azathot mythos

Carcosa_Sensei:I would love to see you try to disintegrate the nothing itself I am everywhere but nowhere so where will you aim with the disintegration bean

3yr

Carcosa_SenseiAuthor

haha you might hold great power but my daughter is technically why those outer gods exist in this world and if she created them she beyond them and if she beyond them that technically mean I am beyond them as well you included

SirPewbsAlot:HAHAHHAHA... how laughable you're lucky the bean god is benevolent for as soon as he wakes up we would all be gone/ azathot mythos

3yr

Carcosa_SenseiAuthor

lol

Carcosa_Sensei:haha you might hold great power but my daughter is technically why those outer gods exist in this world and if she created them she beyond them and if she beyond them that technically mean I am beyond them as well you included

3yr

SirPewbsAlotLv4

"I would love to see you try to disintegrate the nothing itself I am everywhere but nowhere so where will you aim with the disintegration bean" HAHAHAHAHAHA ''bean god uses Nihilikinesis" hehe search it up

3yr

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv11

how does the tragedy fare !?? i mean what kind of tragedy are we talking about here...

3yr

Ototsu_YumeLv11

Tbh I'd also like to know before giving this novel a shot, I'm pretty worn out of seeing so many novels on here with authors whom seem to enjoy tormenting their mc to the point of self harm and worse.

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:how does the tragedy fare !?? i mean what kind of tragedy are we talking about here...

3yr

skizrim_3Lv13

pandora being "alone" and mc being cursed for all his past lives till pandora showed up and maybe more in the future

luisfer:What makes this story have Tragedy?

3yr

TrevorTNTLv15

Fool your power over everything I'd merely in the dimension of information and patterns within the mind and paper the power of potatoes 🥔 is infinite ♾ and exists even in our higher dimension and can even destroy our true bodies should they be used in potato cannons!

Carcosa_Sensei:I created my daughter who created everything so technically I made everything your potatoes have no power over me bow before your creator creator.

3yr

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