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rishin
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2021-08-13 23:21

The story is good, the idea for the novel is also interesting. Your characters are also okay in my open. But the huge turnoff of this novel is the writing. Sentences are jumbled and mixed together due to lack of proper periods and marks. This made the story to be hard to read. You can use this (') mark for the MC dialogue and any character thoughts, while you can use (") quotation mark for normal dialogue.

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Retro_Senpai
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how far did you make it cause it stop at chp 6 and thx for reading

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