I am the True-god of creation who created the daughter of nothingness my existence is abstract so picture me however you like but because I made the world of loner I shall shamelessly give myself a 5-star review P.S this project actually has story already planned out as far as volume 1 please do enjoy.

Hm this is a odd one, have you ever heard a joke and stead of laughing you just thought 'that was funny', like this looks like a good story, but I'm having zero fun. The author is really creative that's for sure, interesting world overall, but the biggest fault here is the storytelling, if I had to guess I would say author is not that used to writting in english, which is not that much of a problem on fanfics, but massive world building + bad storytelling coupled with the non-linear style of explaning will live you confused, the fanfic part of the story didn't even began and I was bored out of my mind. Just my opinion, no hate. Much love.

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the problem i have with this fanfic is mainly the writing quality, because of some typo, weird choice of word, misplacement of (" "), lack of uses of comma in a sentence, and some sentence is so convoluted that i have to read multiple times to make sense of it. for the minor problem of this fanfic is the character design of some antagonist(?) kinda off put for me and the upload schedule is not consistent. for the story and world background i think I will give 5 star(?)

love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop love it please dont drop

The story is good, the idea for the novel is also interesting. Your characters are also okay in my open. But the huge turnoff of this novel is the writing. Sentences are jumbled and mixed together due to lack of proper periods and marks. This made the story to be hard to read. You can use this (') mark for the MC dialogue and any character thoughts, while you can use (") quotation mark for normal dialogue.

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I is good but the author need to update.

Just some gammar mistakes so far in the first 5 chapters(what I'm up to so I dont know the rest). It's pretty good so far, no issues except for gammar. please use grammerly, im almost dying from reading this. xD