so other than well used plot the story is well written and you just hate it because?

well I read the raw and I tell you it's not what you think, you will know if you read a little more of it.

read the raws, a bit different from what you think, the cliches are obvious, but you can't really avoid that much, not only that this novel has been quite good with the usage of cliches, I don't know what's the problem with 'brotherhood', its literally only seen in like the first 20 chapters, also the system actually does have downsides such as him being too powerful and not being able to control his strength, I would agree that he is not very smart or very dumb and he is adequate at best, but you can't really be too picky with all the trash mcs out there, so far the story has been in a pretty good pace and also characters aren't really annoying and even if they are they are all super side characters only shown once, so I wouldn't say a gem of a story, but definitely got enough potential for me to read 100 plus chapters and not be bored

Friend the most basic ability a story and writer must have is to capture the attention of the audience so if it doesn't even do that for me why would I read the raws?

I mean we are saying it's good so you won't miss a good read, it's fine if you don't want to.

sometimes, 20 chapters are just not enough to capture someone's attention, i know at least a few stories that are super good, but because of the time it takes to build up the characters, the story, the powers, and the cast, that it usually takes upwards of 50-60 chapters before you can really get invested, yes the most basic ability of a story is to capture the readers' attention, but that doesn't mean that it always have to follow that, for what i know this story right now is just building upon the abilities of what the mc has, the cast that will eventually be there, building upon the effects of the infinite time, and also using that to say how his future path is, you don't need to be convinced about how good this story is, but its one of those rare gems among the trash that you would find, literally this has been better than most of the past week's novels that has been translated, its pretty good

You act like he became sworn brothers with everyone when in reality he was just good friends with a single guy who helped him out when literally everyone else left him to die alone.

bro i get it. you are not wrong if you left it soon. but story just began after he enters the sect. i don't know about raw . but i read about 40 chapters . and i never seen any disciple life like this one . it has a charm . just try it . it will only take 20 more chapters and about the cliche brother hood - that was too much but after some time... i see it as though ---》 they formed a party to keep in touch with one others so they don't miss opportunities . business guys is great full for saving his life . and he was his friend before other guys are just to be used . but not inhumane in their world . and they there future doesn't look so dark if they follow powerful MC . you know their are followers everywhere, in their cultivation world. i still agree with your opinions about it's being too much cliche.

thanks for saving me wasting my time.

People that say a story is fine if it has clichés because you can't avoid them and people that say you need to stick it out for more than 20 chapters for it to build up and grab your attention, you are abused readers starved for good content. Please, seek better novels. If this novel pleases you, it's good. Don't make people numb to clichés and don't force people through so many chapters. I have written many stories where I as the author don't find it quite interesting yet because I am FAR from getting to the core of the story but I am still making my readers unable to drop it from the moment they start reading the first chapter. Granted, I am not the fastest writer and I am never satisfied with my work as I always feel a need to make everything 200% perfect. (Perfection is impossible and for something to be more than 100% perfect is even more impossible, really letting you know how absurd my expectations of myself really is) I am not saying "Go read my novels, I am so much better" especially because my novels are not on this app/site for now and I am considering adding them to here though I hear the contract is TERRIBLE but you really need to expect more from the novels you read. Especially if they are clearly fanfics posted under original novels because Webnovel doesn't allow you to monetise fanfics (Yes, you can't monetise them because you don't have the right to monetise them so going around that to make money is illegal) Now, I am not saying this is a fanfic or anything, I am just saying, there are a lot of terrible and cliché novels on here so I understand lowering your expectations to enjoy more but you deserve better (Also, there is no way I am going through all this to check for spelling mistakes and punctuation problems as I hate touchscreen)

can you give me the raw link or the title in chinese

just search it in Chinese.

forget ut

修仙！我的增益状态没有时限

thanks

bro, can you recommend me some of the stories that are super good?

i totally agree with you

It seems like you're an ATG lover that's why you suck at rating novels skillfully and not just blabber nonsense to confuse new readers. Dumb

Don't waste your saliva umm. .. I mean your precious time in convincing these dumb guys who are all ATG lovers. 😂 😂 😂

Brotherhood... Ugh, I hate anything with brotherhood or friendship in it. So cringy