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TheAncientOnell
TheAncientOnellLv63yr
2021-07-10 01:07

This book is not good I have no idea why it's rated this high. First of all world backgrounds and cultivation is subpar and familiar nothing fabulous about the at all. The mc is paranoid of being a lab rat which he already is. Hidden abilities for no reason dude cultivation is going against the heavens not hiding because of some formation deemed you mid root you have to hide your brilliance, I've read to many of this kind of mc all of the suck. The system is useless boosts his stats by 600% but takes him 3month just to achieve a minor realm within all the yin and pills consumed. If cultivation is already hard for him now imagine later stages how many pills how many graveyards would he need the thought of it gives me chills. The sect is obviously horrible. The forced jokes are not funny at all sheesh.

Cultivation! My Augmented Statuses Have Unlimited Duration

Turtle Shell and Hemp Rope
4.5
904 Chs

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Jinrex5
Jinrex5Lv4

you got it all wrong

3yr
4
Jinrex5
Jinrex5Lv4

the book isn't sub-par but very good all actions are well within reason and logic

3yr
4
Divine_univers
Divine_universLv15

agreed not a fan of this novel at all

3yr
4
Kisannara
KisannaraLv3

face potential (speed) of mc cultivation is not high, so even if it is 1000% faster it will still be slower compared to someone who has greater potential. slow cultivation speed? I think not. there are a lot slower ones out there that take years to sub-level

3yr
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JakeQueen
JakeQueenLv3

Good morning my lady, which section did you complain about? Is it because of a lack of chapters or just to downgrade this novel for your benefit?

3yr
1
JakeQueen
JakeQueenLv3

And someone doesn't read.

3yr
1
comedyisland
comedyislandLv12

literally everything you said was incorrect

2yr
1
comedyisland
comedyislandLv12

precisely, when he got the 600% cultivation speed boost (not stats like the op said)- it actually only increased his aptitude to equaling a top grade spiritual root, which is 6x his root at the time, the 600% cultivation speed boost becomes irrelevant very quickly anyway

Kisannara:face potential (speed) of mc cultivation is not high, so even if it is 1000% faster it will still be slower compared to someone who has greater potential. slow cultivation speed? I think not. there are a lot slower ones out there that take years to sub-level
2yr
Theo_5201
Theo_5201Lv15

Why are you judging this masterpiece of pacing and world building when you haven’t even bothered to read more than a few chapters. All the things you comment on happen within the first like 20 chapters. I wouldn’t bother to even consider what you think is a good book if you judge the whole quality of a story on the first few chapters where they have to ease you into their world.

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CobraAFE
CobraAFELv13

Time to throw thousands of ever lasting curses and debuffs onto the MC. If you have a technique that steals his Qi, it should in theory be everlasting. Create your own Qi nuclear reactor, providing unlimited energy.

3yr

Grandmist_Sage
Grandmist_SageLv11

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

3yr
Mute
MuteLv13

The system is strong but not broken (Yet) the power gain so far is not rushed so much that the novel is dead in 200 chapters, the characters seem to possess intelligence and are not just stupid side characters there to make the MC look smart, the MC is decently smart, not over the top but above average. The world building isn't there yet but it has potential. Overall i hope this is picked, but it's not a badly translated power fantasy so maybe it won't be picked, the name kinda lets it down and i feel that it will put people off trying this.

3yr
whadip
whadipLv4

Boo. Nothing I haven't see before. person from earth ends up in cultivation world with cheat likes to throw the 'we are brothers ' cliche around disgusting me to no end. He's not particularly smart not is he particularly stupid. But this is so cliche and a textbook that I really don't see the point in bothering to read it after ch.19. His use of the cheat isn't excellent, adequate at best. This novel doesn't have a charm to make me want to read more on the other hand it overuses the brother hood disgusting trope that makes me want to drop so. DRopm . If you don't mind bland cliches with overused brotherhood drama then be my guest.

3yr
InHisName
InHisNameLv6

Just scrap the voting pool already Webnovel. For the second week in a row, the novel with the least amount of votes is the winner of the voting pool. Do they think we're blind? 1. MMORPG: I Can See Hidden Information - 1,169,563 votes. 2. I Established A Magic School After I Failed the CEE! - 628,540 This novel however... A grand total of 98,370. Although this is descipicable practice it would be tolerable if this story was actually decent. Instead, it's a cardboard cutout. The despair...

3yr
SealDeity
SealDeityLv2

I normally don't rate trial reads, but this one deserves it. I like how the MC has a cheat, but it's not over the top super-duper op. I also like how the. MC doesn't have 'heaven-defying talent' like most MCs in this troup.

3yr
Anbu310
Anbu310Lv14

Really good start 👏👌👍. It starts out like the novel Warlock of the Magus World ...

3yr
kadri_al
kadri_alLv1

Anyone has the raw title? it seems to have been changed. can't find it.🙏🙏🙏

3yr
Oto
OtoLv14

First five chapters were an exact copy from another novel. I had to check multiple times to see that the novel was in fact published less than three weeks ago due to the super strong deja vu. From chapters 5 to 35 it was actually quite good. However, suddenly the author had a brain aneurism and the plot became complete trash. Its gone from interesting to plain cliche. Also, this novel only has around 150 chapters currently written. Webnovel sure has fallen to be translating these new novels.

3yr
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