Foo_Yung

Why are you obsessed with twins? It's a borderline fetish at this point. Kind of vile really. You've hyped yourself up on the writing quality but you clearly don't proof read your own work... There are few genuine dialogue instances, most conversations seem forced and pointless, especially when the MC talks to the system. A lot of chapters can be skipped because they are pointless and add nothing to the story. A number of characters introduced fail to connect with the reader but there a numerous chapters where they take up words but lack substance. For example Gerald and crew. A couple of random sluts and clowns that waste paragraphs of text. There is obviously a need for them to exist in the story but what's the point in putting so much effort into these characters just for them to lack substance and fail to connect with the reader? Skipping any and all dialogue containing these characters doesn't effect the readers knowledge of the story. They add absolutely nothing. Also a slime as a mythic creature is a joke. In what mythology is a slime known as a mythic creature? Or does a slime even exist in any existing mythology? You've imposed a rule in the title of your novel then circumvented it immediately with nonsense. Anyway don't take this comment personally as I imagine it's your first time writing a novel and you probably have no formal education in writing. Keep writing and improving. You'll probably get better with experience.

I think a lot of hype is built up for this novel in the early chapters, the guy is a regressor, knows the secrets of the game and can progress quickly, however as the story progresses while the MC is strong due to his talent, it's a quick drop off. The author is the type to throw endless tribulations at the MC so that as soon as one problem is solved 7 new doomsday scenarios appear. Evenly the MC just starts lucking his way through impossible fights that should obliterate him via plot armour one after another after another. It takes away any sense of achievement. I mean you could skip the scenario and you wouldn't really have missed anything because it doesn't matter. The MC is pretty problematic too. For starters he is a r*pist. He enjoys hurting his partners which gives you insight into the type of person the author is. He's also the most unless regressor in any regression novel ever written. His regression benefits only helped within the first 50 chapters. How this clown managed to hit rank 9 with a B grade talent on his first attempt is just impossible. The author put zero thought into this and just uses it as a troupe. Get used to 1 hit kills because this guy dies so much it's turns from pathetic to funny. At one point the guy obtains undying talent and due to a certain treasure can immediately heal to full health after getting 1 bombed. This is heavily abused as the MC is arrogant and semi retarded in the decisions he makes in taking on tasks that are way out of his league. This situations turn into him getting 1 shot killed over and over again in a single fight. Where is the sense of achievement for the reader here? He is supposed to be OP but he is constantly out of his league so he just comes across as a clown. The author's desperation to build tension ruins the story (personal option btw) There are clearly good aspects of the novel as I managed to hit over 200 chapters before binning it off. It was just the same thing over and over. The author peaked pre chapter 100. Anyway that's my 2 cent. Hope everyone has a better time with this than me. Good luck

Did you continue reading after 31 chapters?

Why does this guy talk to himself so much? Does he have ADHD or something?? Or is this a zoomer trait that I'm unaware of?

so much cringe

Nice chapter

Most cringe chapter so far which isn't an easy feat with all the garbage monologuing of the previous chapters. Kind of tired of this cry baby bs tbh. I've yet to build any respect for the MC.

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Doesn't matter if it's poorly written or not since it wasn't worth reading. On to the next one.

This chapter was... booooring. It's like the MC suddenly went ret**ded. Feels kind of pointless. Glad we filtered this one out before we got to the paid chapters.