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2021-05-27 05:21

As the author of this book, I will really appreciate if people who are reading this book, add this to their library. It really helps out a small creator like me. 🍀

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as1804
as1804Lv13

Is it harem?

lon_okami
lon_okamiAuthor

Yes, to some extent

as1804:Is it harem?
NULL_MONARCH
NULL_MONARCHLv4

polygamous end or single

lon_okami:Yes, to some extent
Lord_Eternity
Lord_EternityLv4

let me tell you, every girl forgets him after love confession. Also I think he will end up in no relationship at all, or will die at end of story

NULL_MONARCH:polygamous end or single
Ancient_Rebel
Ancient_RebelLv12

the world God only knows anime like ??

Lord_Eternity:let me tell you, every girl forgets him after love confession. Also I think he will end up in no relationship at all, or will die at end of story
Lord_Eternity
Lord_EternityLv4

NO One girl is abandoned and is pocessed by devil(Most likely dies) then his target is taken.

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Tunic01
Tunic01Lv15

Rip

lon_okami:Yes, to some extent
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A fantastic piece of work from Author-san. A marvelous concept storywise. Although the pacing seems to be quite slow compared to some other stories I've read so far, Author-san has done an amazing work using it to give the readers a detailed, in-depth look into the characters' interactions, relationships, and machinations of our seemingly impassive and calculative MC. The interactions between the characters also feel quite natural and realistic. The only slight criticism I have is about the grammar. There's usually some misplacement of pronouns or other tidbits during most chapters, and some descriptions of the characters' interactions that just feel a bit wrong detracting from the story, but otherwise it's quite good. I recommend using Grammarly if you don't already. It effectively and efficiently aids in helping fix grammar mistakes and also allows you to learn from them properly. It's also free which is always a plus. Moreover, personally, I'm somewhat sad it doesn't seem to be a harem-type story so far but hey, that's just me. It would be quite interesting to possibly have a side-story or development where all the girlfriends that the MC has helped, remember him for it or whatnot. However, Author-san may possibly have some plans regarding this already. That aside, I'm definitely enjoying the read so far. I can't wait to see how Author-san develops this since it has so much potential and they're absolutely smashing it so far. Keep up the good work Author-san, you have my support! [img=recommend]

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