Lord_Eternity

Could have been a good story. I tried turning off my brain while reading but it's still too much. Maybe it will get better in future chaps but I already have given it enough time. I would suggest a rewrite to correct mistakes and have a proper logical flow.

At this point. I turn my brain off😮‍💨

Sometimes, small gestures and actions could have a much larger impact we never imagined.

Lucian at start

Selene

shorty detected

Should have been a really good story. First of all, the progression is different than promised in summary. Second, this story is unusually slow.