The story is a great read so far and it has a lot of potential. I could see this become one of the top ten fanfics on the app. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

This story has tremendous potential, the author is not in a hurry to develop, so we will be able to get to know several characters well over time, see historical events from various points of view or even seeming everyday events, the senario of marvel it gives the author a very big stage to work on, considering that the marvel universe has infinite realities, I even wonder if over time and due to the author having given the mc a system, he will be able to visit other worlds like dc or worlds of books and others fantasies, just keeping marvel as the main universe, and this is just one of the possibilities, the MC despite being a normal person in his first life, learns and understands about the ailments of the world and what has to be done to stay strong , but not for that reason he becomes a complete bloodthirsty or piscicopath, but he has no aspirations to be a "savior" of the world, basically he is well balanced. If the author continues with the good work, this story will be incredible as a fantasy of world development and everyday life.

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Needs a native english-speaking editor, the grammar is very taxing to read but the story and the idea behind it have good potential. .......

Story gets ruined at chapter 44-45... all I can say is to forced.

The story looks very good but it needs more polishing as there are grammer mistakes which are very confusing but that can be fixed in the future but from my perspective it is better to fix it earlier as the novel wont lose readers. Also mc's system is not very good written as there are also some plot holes. In short story is good looking but not that good written which is not a problem that cant be fixed with time, effort and hard work. I know it will be better then now in the future for sure then it can be edited or re written by the author. Thank you for your efforts author and take care.

the only major problem in this story it's WQ, because it's kinda hard to read but I'm still able to understand what the sentence mean. for minor problems in this story are characters interaction with each other a bit stiff and some part of the story didn't suit my taste, and for US and WB I'm giving 5 star.

please correct the writing at the beginning of the chapter and about others 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍

This Novel is amazing. They have quick releases, high quality chapters, and long chapters. I also enjoy how the book isn’t system dominated and has Good character development.