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2021-06-08 17:05

Needs a native english-speaking editor, the grammar is very taxing to read but the story and the idea behind it have good potential. .......

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I apologize for the delay in updating. After three years, I’ve finally had the opportunity to revise and enhance the grammar and sentence structure of my story. The process of refining these elements is aimed at making the narrative more engaging and professionally crafted.

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