The story looks very good but it needs more polishing as there are grammer mistakes which are very confusing but that can be fixed in the future but from my perspective it is better to fix it earlier as the novel wont lose readers. Also mc's system is not very good written as there are also some plot holes. In short story is good looking but not that good written which is not a problem that cant be fixed with time, effort and hard work. I know it will be better then now in the future for sure then it can be edited or re written by the author. Thank you for your efforts author and take care.
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I apologize for the delay in updating. After three years, I’ve finally had the opportunity to revise and enhance the grammar and sentence structure of my story. The process of refining these elements is aimed at making the narrative more engaging and professionally crafted.
