The story in the first few chapters was amazing. A traumatized character, a war against powerful aliens, strange powers and a promise of revenge. But after he meets Liiza the focus of the story completely changes. Hundreds of chapters describing the love relationship between Khan and Liiza, made me so bored. I can't read a story that ignores everything else and focuses on the romance between a human and an alien. It's sad, the action and adventure promised in the first chapters was completely in the background. The author should change the name of the story to "MY GIRLFRIEND IS AN ALIEN" It will make more sense to new readers. In short, the story is amazing, the author writes very well, but he focused on the romance. Someone like it, but I just got bored.
Liked by 9 people
LIKEIt's true that the 3rd is very battle focused but he cuddles and kisses Delia 2 or 3 weeks (they spent a week in the prison so 1-2 weeks) after the break with liza and they are attracted by thier mana, unresistible, you wrote that a month after two mana connected people are a couple they become unseparable or something like that. I had alot more faith in mana but I guess a 27 yr footsoldier can break that bond in a week.
Eveofchaos:Yeah, but I wouldn't call it romance focused. Anyway, just my opinion.
That bond was never broken.
Morgonpisset:It's true that the 3rd is very battle focused but he cuddles and kisses Delia 2 or 3 weeks (they spent a week in the prison so 1-2 weeks) after the break with liza and they are attracted by thier mana, unresistible, you wrote that a month after two mana connected people are a couple they become unseparable or something like that. I had alot more faith in mana but I guess a 27 yr footsoldier can break that bond in a week.