Eveofchaos

It's a tense period when many things are still unclear, and the two didn't have a good chance to talk since Senerth's mission ended. I feel it's normal for the tones to be heated. Still, I can always make mistakes, which I'll fix when pointed out.

Don't worry, I understand your point. I actually wanted to make the fight more heated, but it just wouldn't have made sense. If anything, the fact that Khan used his knife should tell you that the General was no weakling.

It wouldn't have made sense due to power scaling. The evolution wouldn't have been much otherwise, and Khan could defeat fifth-level warriors years ago.

I'll change it to something less specific.

No. I'm Italian.

I've been very inconsistent. You guys are just too good to me.

It's me who sucked in past months/year.

I mean, it mostly was a matter of physical strength with Monica now.

I wrote that he stomped toward the incoming attack. Ugh, sure, arrowhead can work. It's just that the world sort of collapses at its passage.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my stories so much. As for the descriptions, I was mostly worried about whether I made mistakes and such. I reread it, and while it's vague and a bit short, I feel it can work as an initial/general description.