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Eveofchaos
EveofchaosAuthor3yr
2021-06-18 20:11

Hello, author here. Thank you for having given my second novel a chance. I plan to update two chapters every day. Moreover, I always read the comments, so I will fix every error that you point out in less than a day. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the story.

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SkyAboveTheSky
SkyAboveTheSkyLv5

Good luck.

ikka
ikkaLv13

any romance? hoping for a no...

Dave_S
Dave_SLv15

A new book eve? Nice, though this seems to confirm what i dont want to admit... the birth of the demonic sword Is reaching its end 😭 You are a great auther and iv seen how you have grown and improved as a writer, so i cant wait to read your new book

SirBruhington
SirBruhingtonLv13

Eve!!! That's awesome you're starting a new book. Im excited to give it a read through. Still, kinda wondering how this will affect BoTDS, and Noah. Is Birth coming to an end, or are you just branching out in your extra time?

SirBruhington
SirBruhingtonLv13

I'm scared!! I really hope there's still tons of Birth left. This new book does kinda make me feel like we're saying goodbye to Noah real soon though. That's going to be a sad day.

Dave_S:A new book eve? Nice, though this seems to confirm what i dont want to admit... the birth of the demonic sword Is reaching its end 😭 You are a great auther and iv seen how you have grown and improved as a writer, so i cant wait to read your new book
Eveofchaos
EveofchaosAuthor

Extra time. Don't worry, Demonic Sword is still my main focus. I only wanted to vent some ideas and see where they went.

SirBruhington:Eve!!! That's awesome you're starting a new book. Im excited to give it a read through. Still, kinda wondering how this will affect BoTDS, and Noah. Is Birth coming to an end, or are you just branching out in your extra time?
Monarchofchaos
MonarchofchaosLv2

I would want some romance like in birth of the demonic sword even doe there’s basically non he’s at least with someone.

ikka:any romance? hoping for a no...
ikka
ikkaLv13

you might want some but i dont..

Monarchofchaos:I would want some romance like in birth of the demonic sword even doe there’s basically non he’s at least with someone.
Monarchofchaos
MonarchofchaosLv2

Well everyone’s got there own opinion. You can’t please everyone. Whether or not there is it’s up to eve. So let’s just wait and see.

ikka:you might want some but i dont..
TheUnknownEntity
TheUnknownEntityLv4

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DaoistB8VDRz
DaoistB8VDRzLv3

just a question how many elements of mana are there

OmniBurn04
OmniBurn04Lv14

How do you write so much?

Eveofchaos
EveofchaosAuthor

Experience I guess. It has taken me a while to increase my daily wordcount.

OmniBurn04:How do you write so much?
SiR_Maina
SiR_MainaLv15

I just found out you have another novel in the works!! So very looking forward to it. Thanks so much for BoDS and dropping the little surprise gem for us.

leorichard2021_0515
leorichard2021_0515Lv1

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Silencer5EMR3
Silencer5EMR3Lv10

Wew... imagination is limitless indeed

Homelander69
Homelander69Lv13

hey there nice pic

Dave_S
Dave_SLv15

That mean when birth does end we will get 5 chapters of chaos heir everyday? 😃 Not that i want birth to end, i think id cry

Eveofchaos:Experience I guess. It has taken me a while to increase my daily wordcount.
Eveofchaos
EveofchaosAuthor

I will definitely increase with chaos once demonic sword ends, but that will still take some time.

Dave_S:That mean when birth does end we will get 5 chapters of chaos heir everyday? 😃 Not that i want birth to end, i think id cry
Jamie_Brown_4994
Jamie_Brown_4994Lv15

for the sake of all our sanity, increase chapter releases! lol

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TinyBookDragon
TinyBookDragonLv4

Disclaimer: I have enjoyed this story and like the premise but this is a complaining review. I still highly recommend giving this a try. These are just the problems I think exist and they haven't stopped me from continuing to read this. As I read this I come across a few critiques/personal opinions. 1. The human race is said to be spaceworthy and traveling to other planets, conquering or making alliances with other races. Yet throughout the story the scale never really feels like that is the case. It consistently feels like the only people in existence are the characters introduced 'on screen'. Ex. He is on a world where the race is said to have been in control of the entire planet and yet I never felt like there were more than a few dozen people living there. Most of the story takes place in training camps that barely seem to have any people. 2. His relationship with the alien woman, Liiza, has come to dominate at least half of the story and is tiring at this point to read about. It was interesting at first but now it is just repetitive. The story stopped being about the MC getting stronger and traveling the universe to find his enemy and now it's all about how he will do anything for his relationship. The relationship that multiple times in the story has been said to be 'toxic'. 3. I've noticed this in many stories. When an author wants to make his MC seem smarter or better they will make their superiors dumber or incompetent to lend credence to the MC. This happens here with the MC's military command. Someone in command should not be so flustered or easily persuaded by a teenage boy. Even if the said teenage boy has 'magical alien trauma' giving him OP powers and plot armor.

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Review by chapter 269 I binged the story in the past few days. I decided to take a break before continuing the journey. I wish to write honest feedback before any recollection gets muddled. I am a very picky reader so I may be biased. I will go through my thoughts relative to other works expected from webnovel. The author is passionate in what he does. He pushed himself everyday and relys on the readers for motivation. It is evident in his recent work that kept me reading unlike his previous work. For reasons I can't recall, I couldn't get past it's single digits. I'll be following his projects in the future the will surely be better. Anyways, let get back to the subject. The story is nothing special. A work one who enjoys the classic solo edgy beat em up would enjoy. There are certain aspects that makes it preferable compared to the rest. There is no mention of systems and 'skills/magics' are not explored anatomically. This allows for more focus on the story that many novels fail to understand. Characters are explored in more detail, monologues are more prevalent, everything one expects from a webnovel is there and more. But that's where it ends. The core of the story is set in flaws just like every other novel. The Mc has a questionable incentive, the world is nothing special/ doubtful perhaps and most character have a pretense of third dimensionality Going into slight detail, the Mc's motivation mostly arises from a reoccurring nightmare. Personal ideologies push the Mc in pursuit of power. I prefer them to be more tangible/physical. It gives more substance to motivation compared to a drive derived from an unrealistic unbreakable will. The Mc is perceived with a lot of flaws, the core of what makes characters alive. When the flaws are put to the test however, they never falter. It annoys me when it occurs in the story. Show me some weakness, sacrifice the mc's objective success and potential, loss friends, family because of these weaknesses. These weaknesses are bottled up and rationally explored for growth instead of exploding unfavorably for a more organic story. The Mc is a Mary Sue when it matters. The world revolves around the Mc. No single action from characters can alter the perceived story like the Mc. For this reason and many minor others, characters don't feel alive and relevant even though some are explored in detail. Any given character has to be written like a Mc. That is what makes the world vivid and lively. Perhaps George is a fair character but the author Insistance on the Mc's solo action doesn't give him a chance to shine. The Mc meets love interests at the beginning of each planet. The Mc relys on them for growth. I like reliance but they don't necessarily need to be love interests. It gets tiring. For reasons mentioned above, the world inst exciting beyond the expected big bad needs to die. One example, the juxtaposition of Mcs enrollment in a military and his continued defiance of orders and relished freedom bothers me. Whether the military has reasons for them or not, it goes against the perceived realism associated to these associations. Many more occur in the story making it wacky. It's a good read. Nothing exciting I would say.

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