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Daoist490051
Daoist490051Lv113yr
2021-06-05 17:28

If you like dual cultivation novels then look no further and give this a try. Writing quality is fine (I didn't find any mistakes with my meager ability) and the plot even though some what generic is interesting. Unfortunately I found the story too early and now I have to wait for more chapters!!!!!

Past life sage: This life a dual cultivator

purple_mage
4.7
505 Chs

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Divine_univers
Divine_universLv15

caught my interest so far :)

3yr
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shadowfox9801
shadowfox9801Lv15

there's a grammar error in the description how did you miss "now here" and mistake it for "nowhere"

2yr
HannazRolynn
HannazRolynnLv3

Are all mc's wives virgins?

1yr
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DruggedCookie
DruggedCookieLv2

Question, in the harem and yuri or do they only love the protagonist?

1yr
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Ayce_o_Spade
Ayce_o_SpadeLv15

You ever figure out if this novel was safe?

DruggedCookie:Question, in the harem and yuri or do they only love the protagonist?
1yr
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DruggedCookie
DruggedCookieLv2

No, I really didn't risk it, dual cultivation usually sees a lot with Yuri, so I didn't risk it.

Ayce_o_Spade:You ever figure out if this novel was safe?
1yr
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DruggedCookie
DruggedCookieLv2

The only one that I'm sure Yuri doesn't have is my Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires, which can be understood by reading the novel, although many were no longer virgins or things like that, in the end they only they fall in love with the MC, and there is one who is Bi, and she said that she understood that they only loved the protagonist, and that she would only love him only too.

DruggedCookie:No, I really didn't risk it, dual cultivation usually sees a lot with Yuri, so I didn't risk it.
1yr
DruggedCookie
DruggedCookieLv2

I do not know if I explained well

DruggedCookie:The only one that I'm sure Yuri doesn't have is my Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires, which can be understood by reading the novel, although many were no longer virgins or things like that, in the end they only they fall in love with the MC, and there is one who is Bi, and she said that she understood that they only loved the protagonist, and that she would only love him only too.
1yr
Ayce_o_Spade
Ayce_o_SpadeLv15

I understand. Shivam has one with no yuri. And ive read a good bit of ”dual cultivator with a system” and there hasn’t been any yet.

1yr
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Hawazen_Asary
Hawazen_AsaryLv1

So this novel have yuri or not cant anyone answer this simple question ? i dont want to waste time like reading The Cursed Gamer until chapter 100 where it have yuri and droped it

1yr
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DruggedCookie
DruggedCookieLv2

I think there was before, but it ended up being eliminated

Hawazen_Asary:So this novel have yuri or not cant anyone answer this simple question ? i dont want to waste time like reading The Cursed Gamer until chapter 100 where it have yuri and droped it
1yr
Other Reviews
Terrell_Melillo_9288
Terrell_Melillo_9288Lv15

As I've said in a previous comment in this book, I love mc's who are previously top cultivators who've reincarnated with their unimaginable techniques from a higher realm to the mortal realm. This story has captivated a self-proclaimed critic and enjoyed a steady loyalty and appreciation from said self-proclaimed critic. now it might not seem much to the unfamiliar reader of reviews , but I assure you esteemed discerning fellow reader that this is a great journey you want to be apart of.

2yr

ABDevilliers
ABDevilliersLv1

Writing quality is acceptable... Story line is interesting... There are some interesting girls despite the early chapters... Overally a good dual cultivation novel.. looking forward for further content...

3yr
Bartothegreat
BartothegreatLv14

First off, thanks for the content purple_mage. I've enjoyed reading so far. A few things I'd like to say. Please work on your grammar and spelling. I think you just need to proofread a bit more and it will fix most of the mistakes. In terms of the story itself and moving forward, I think you should really keep in mind: A. pacing B. conflict . Right now the pacing is moving very fast, which is fine, but just be careful because if you do slow it down, it can be jarring for the reader. The only real downside to fast pacing is character development can be kind of neglected in favor of fast plot. In terms of conflict.. I think it's no secret that our MC is OP, and that is intended. Which is just fine. You just have to get creative to write a real conflict for him to face. Remember, not all conflicts have to involve swords and bloodshed and who has the higher cultivation realm. Finally, I REALLY hope you, in future, put some love into character development, especially for the female characters (the harem). Interactions, dialogue, maybe even dedicated chapters from the woman's perspective? A little bit of love can go a long way. I look forward to seeing where you are going to take things!

2yr
badboyz999
badboyz999Lv4

i like your story ....keep going fighting[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
CHAOS_FOOLISH
CHAOS_FOOLISHLv12

Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!

12mth
DkzinNoSeraph
DkzinNoSeraphLv11

It's a good novel, the story is very interesting, but I feel that even though it's a double cultivation novel, it has a lot of lemons, so much so that it makes the plot stand a little still, I think that even in this type of novel there must be a consensus between the plot progression and the lemons

2yr
ashish777
ashish777Lv10

Big sis..it is just starting..Heheeeh😀😍😍🤩🤩😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😼😻😻😼😻😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼😼bring it on author🔥🔥🔥we will see whether I can hold on while reading your chapter

3yr
MoWuyue
MoWuyueLv4

I'm on chapter 81 currently and I'm satisfied with the mc and fmc.. really love the novel .. .keep up the good work author, hope you become a full pledge author..

1yr
dARKrePULSeR
dARKrePULSeRLv2

My rate for this is 5 star as i am a dual cultivator story lover but i hate the fact every 2 or 3 chapters there's always a s**, i understand that it is the nature of the story but there's also other tags that needs to be fulfilled Overall it was a good storyline!

2yr
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