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BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv52yr
2022-09-28 22:32

Utter waste of time. Moronic beyond belief. uhh, i really have nothing else to say about it, it's just plain moronic in every aspect of it.................

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BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

looking at all those 5 star reviews, I lose more of my hope in humanity, and that's impressive, considering how little of it I have left.

waryfishy
waryfishyAuthor

Yeah I can see that I wrote those chapters quite some time ago and have hopefully improved since then

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

I hope so too. Unfortunately I rate what I see. And with what I saw, there was no way I could read further, even if it improved later on.

waryfishy:Yeah I can see that I wrote those chapters quite some time ago and have hopefully improved since then
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

btw your reply got deleted. u can't say sh1* :D because it's clearly a terrible terrible world for webnovel.

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Snails4Lifee
Snails4LifeeLv3

I like it, but I don't see a point in Naruto 2.0. He really cant do much with MC 1. In this world, The version of Naruto would be so much weaker. Chakra doesn't / isn't supposed to exist (Cuz there's no Kayuga), therefore, no Chakra. That means no senjutsu, no sage of six paths to pave the way for "Naruto". Even more so, "Naruto" shouldn't be this strong. Uzumaki isn't a clan here, Kurama doesnt really exist, and he wasn't or Shouldn't be as pressured, after all he's not handling the responsibility of saving the world / saving the villages. He wouldnt or shouldnt grow as fast. With clan bloodline, and Kurama (Who is a little like dark ​shadow, has its own thoughts) and Chakra, that would actually be three quirks. Going any further would make it four. Besides, the original Naruto cant do anything to something not physical anyways (ex: Obito who only relied on Kamuii). So why is he here, if hes no relivent to plot?? 2. "Naruto" in this world has no plot armour. If he did, then It wouldn't make sense for Izuku to have OFA. From what you've written so far, it seems "Naruto" has a simular personallity to the original. Reckless and brash. If there was no plot armour the original, I really doubt if Naruto would even have the skills to be Chunin, even with Uzumaki heritage. 3. No talk-no-jutsu. He has no tragic pass. "Naruto" has a pretty normal family, no clans and ninjas after him, no corrupted higher-ups onto him, and no 9-tail rampage. MC had her faith in heros at a young age, along with her brother. Sympathy in the plot would be incredibly forced.... So yeah, why does this "Naruto" exist this time?

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