After MC showed photo of their grandmother to Tomura , she warned him not to tell anybody about it , right ? next day she just straight up confessed it to their mother ........ like are you for real ? yeah , i get it that she's a child , but why would you say it at the first possible opportunity.... When Tomura murdered their entire family on her eyes and mutilated half of her body , did she just tried to calm him down ? Wow , that's some really great sisterly love over here , right ? When All For One took the siblings in , he said to Hana that she can ask for something after she achieved breakthrough in her training , yea ? And this great sister never asked to see her brother for 4 years ( maybe more , but i simply dropper this novel at this point of time ) , does it make any sense ? Overall the story maybe would have been interesting , but the way you presented it was just awful in my opinion.
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It wasn't awful per se... Not all Author's have the knowledge of what really happens in complicated Family Relationships. Did get your point though...
You forgot to mention how a 4 year old managed to move his half mutilated and bleeding sister (5-6year old ish) without using his palms and leaving no evidence behind. moved her to an alleyway instead of asking for help from ppl, but then goes with the first person that appears before him. or how... nvm, i'm done wasting my time on this trash fanfic.
