I like it, but I don't see a point in Naruto 2.0. He really cant do much with MC 1. In this world, The version of Naruto would be so much weaker. Chakra doesn't / isn't supposed to exist (Cuz there's no Kayuga), therefore, no Chakra. That means no senjutsu, no sage of six paths to pave the way for "Naruto". Even more so, "Naruto" shouldn't be this strong. Uzumaki isn't a clan here, Kurama doesnt really exist, and he wasn't or Shouldn't be as pressured, after all he's not handling the responsibility of saving the world / saving the villages. He wouldnt or shouldnt grow as fast. With clan bloodline, and Kurama (Who is a little like dark shadow, has its own thoughts) and Chakra, that would actually be three quirks. Going any further would make it four. Besides, the original Naruto cant do anything to something not physical anyways (ex: Obito who only relied on Kamuii). So why is he here, if hes no relivent to plot?? 2. "Naruto" in this world has no plot armour. If he did, then It wouldn't make sense for Izuku to have OFA. From what you've written so far, it seems "Naruto" has a simular personallity to the original. Reckless and brash. If there was no plot armour the original, I really doubt if Naruto would even have the skills to be Chunin, even with Uzumaki heritage. 3. No talk-no-jutsu. He has no tragic pass. "Naruto" has a pretty normal family, no clans and ninjas after him, no corrupted higher-ups onto him, and no 9-tail rampage. MC had her faith in heros at a young age, along with her brother. Sympathy in the plot would be incredibly forced.... So yeah, why does this "Naruto" exist this time?
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Because I need Kurama to exist
..So will "Naruto's" Chakra be Kurama's? Otherwise it would be classified as a seperate quirk, cuz he was his own thoughts and stuff..
**Separate
You know how Nezu's an animal with a quirk. Well Kurama's the same
So Kurama was just sealed inside Naruto as seperate entity? Good to know. Is there a reason tho? The original reason was to keep the village safe. Kurama can just force someone out of 'his' mindscape. If there was no valid reason or plot armour there really is no way to befriend Kurama, because that would be straight up imprisoning and milking him for power. (Also isn't Kurama a being make fully of Chakra? Even more so he increases vitality and can use a dimensional plane to communicate with his siblings... That's quite different from Nezu. Anyways, I still don't see how the Naruto of this world is relevant to the plot.) If you find this annoying, I'll stop...
He isn't that relivant it just helps to have him there as for the rest just don't look to far into it
and it's not annoying I actualy quite enjoy this
