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Dao_of_Melancholy
Dao_of_MelancholyLv133yr
2021-05-17 03:12

Interesting choice with her brother I can see many ways that this could go she could easily become a hero a villain or something else entirely I can’t wait to see what happens next

MHA/BNHA Hana Shimura with Kamui

waryfishy
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ILoveChaos
ILoveChaosLv3

Just because your main character is the sister of my main character you get a five..........................................................

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Left_Nut_Of_Madara
Left_Nut_Of_MadaraLv13

a nice original take i look forward to where you take this after all not many if at all makes there fanfics about a sibling to one of the originally established villians.

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jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5

Wao, unexpected turn of the situation, I did not think of finding a story with that of the protagonist having "tomura shigaraki" as a brother, I like how it progresses and how you put the drama, I wonder what decision Rumi will make when she meets her friend but from another side (although knowing her, who has also killed people and fought in clandestine struggles, first she will be in shock and then she will cry and ask me to tell her what happened, and in the end she will choose to be by her side, since Rumi not that we say a person who follows the rules to the letter, in the anime it is shown that he lives far away and does not care about the opinions of others). - I liked your story of Rumi and the she protagonist (I hope you finish it, although only time will tell).

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Snails4Lifee
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I like it, but I don't see a point in Naruto 2.0. He really cant do much with MC 1. In this world, The version of Naruto would be so much weaker. Chakra doesn't / isn't supposed to exist (Cuz there's no Kayuga), therefore, no Chakra. That means no senjutsu, no sage of six paths to pave the way for "Naruto". Even more so, "Naruto" shouldn't be this strong. Uzumaki isn't a clan here, Kurama doesnt really exist, and he wasn't or Shouldn't be as pressured, after all he's not handling the responsibility of saving the world / saving the villages. He wouldnt or shouldnt grow as fast. With clan bloodline, and Kurama (Who is a little like dark ​shadow, has its own thoughts) and Chakra, that would actually be three quirks. Going any further would make it four. Besides, the original Naruto cant do anything to something not physical anyways (ex: Obito who only relied on Kamuii). So why is he here, if hes no relivent to plot?? 2. "Naruto" in this world has no plot armour. If he did, then It wouldn't make sense for Izuku to have OFA. From what you've written so far, it seems "Naruto" has a simular personallity to the original. Reckless and brash. If there was no plot armour the original, I really doubt if Naruto would even have the skills to be Chunin, even with Uzumaki heritage. 3. No talk-no-jutsu. He has no tragic pass. "Naruto" has a pretty normal family, no clans and ninjas after him, no corrupted higher-ups onto him, and no 9-tail rampage. MC had her faith in heros at a young age, along with her brother. Sympathy in the plot would be incredibly forced.... So yeah, why does this "Naruto" exist this time?

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_Shiromi_
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I came here to search copper but found gold.Anyway this a good fanfic to be honest also have potential keep a good work and take care yourself author-san...

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ZaneHaisel
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