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IamSuperflous
IamSuperflousLv113yr
2021-11-29 05:04

An interesting story. I’m not a fan of naive protags but story kept me going. Thankfully, after 200 chapters, protagonist starts showing maturity and story becomes even more intereating. I quite like the Cultivation world volume. Overall, a good novel. By the way, author, does the story end at 314 chaps? I’m not preveliged user

Yin-Yang Harmony System

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
4.2
315 Chs

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Nero_Kaslana
Nero_KaslanaLv2

Quando vai lança cap novo de the gamer system?

3yr
SenpaiDong
SenpaiDongLv4

Thats almost 63% of the whole novel

3yr
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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

This is the third review after 210 chapters that includes two volumes. Please read this so that you won't need to waste words to complain. First, Mike is not a hero, not a cold killer, not smart, and not even fearless to his death. He is an idiot that doesn't feel likes thinking through the circumstances. He is emotionally weak so character development is the major part of this book. As a writer, I apologize for not being consistent over some factors that are explained early in the story which over explains many things that are not necessary. You can freely skip those details in your mind. For writing this book, I am very satisfied with my story development and if you read it carefully, you can find hints of future events early in the story. As much as I spent time writing MC, I have tried to keep other main characters 3D. You can find it as you reach the second volume. Finally, the last thing that I want to tell you is something that speaks to the story tags. It's an action, adventure, adult, comedic, dramatic, story set in a world where adult stuff is very common.

3yr

Saltyfig
SaltyfigLv11

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3yr
Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor

This is the perfect rating I could give myself. Well, now let's talk thoroughly about each quality and why they deserve stars that are given: (Disclaimer- This book is extremely dedicated to improving the length of your little brother, so if you are under eighteen. Please proceed with caution) Writing Quality- It has been around nine months since I've started writing my first book. And I don't how much I've improved? I don't even know whether I have improved or not. So, please comment after reading the chapter whether my writing was good, bad, or worst. Stability of Updates- You'll get a chapter each day and it will increase as the conditions set in the first chapter of this book. So, please support this book with voting power stones for more content. Till now, I haven't missed a single day and I am not planning to miss either. Story Development- It's not going for rapid development or slow development. Everything will improve at its own pace and if you read the story carefully, you will understand why? And it has a unique story plot behind each arc. Character Design- My characters aren't the perfect ones that's why character development is one of the main scopes in my books. My characters will suffer, they will understand and thoroughly change to become what they were meant to be. World Background- It is a bit lacking in the first twenty chapters, but the world will be soon revealed with lots of new techs, explorations, story plots, and exciting adventures. Now, let's talk about why should you read this story. - To improve the length of your little brother - To laugh out and forget all kinds of tension - To immerse yourself in the world of VR and superheroes - To support me!!!

3yr
Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15

just finna say one thing and leave a perfectly avg review since I just started reading this novel... the author thinks writing a reta®ded mc is what constitutes comedy...

3yr
Suoshi
SuoshiLv2

Pretty good writing style. I have no major grammar or vocab errors to report. But the world background could do with a bit of shaping up. Other than that, not bad.

3yr
Reaper9X9
Reaper9X9Lv12

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2yr
Manabu_Horikita
Manabu_HorikitaLv4

The story is a bit difficult to read due to the grammar and general sentence construction but if you can power through that then there is a decent story to be explored. I am still in the beginning chapters and there haven't been any major plot-holes yet. Sometimes things don't make sense but if you just turn-off your brain and read this as a light-hearted story without trying to find mistakes then you will definitely have an enjoyable experience. The Author has replied to someone else's review about the editing so the language might change in the future and let the story shine with it's full potential. The only concern is the power system of the MC as there is a lot going on with that and that means that it can turn into a Deus Ex Machina really quickly. Till now the Author has kept things well balanced mostly so that may be unnecessary concern. Definitely recommended for anyone intrested in harem OP protagonist with some cultivation mixed in.

3yr
Castor_Med0
Castor_Med0Lv3

MC is retard and a masochist. He gets abused and hit by all girls, and gets together with a prostitute. He is the ultimate beta!

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Nom_Nom_1836
Nom_Nom_1836Lv4

This novel is very good to read, but Mc is too lazy in my opinion and the ending of the story made me dissatisfied. I really like such novels, if anyone knows similar to this one, please write in the comment.

2yr
Andrew_Smith_4482
Andrew_Smith_4482Lv15

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