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Dynamist
DynamistLv12yr
2022-05-26 23:42

Too many plot holes and continuity errors. The author notes actually say things like "There are plot holes in this chapter, ignore them and just enjoy" and "I don't care about how this is supposed to happen, meh the important thing is protagonist can get more girls now". Also, there is blatant bias against Sakura in at least upto the chapters I have read, so skip this if you like Sakura.

In Naruto with Slightly Perverted System

SupremeCookie
4.8
151 Chs

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SupremeCookie
SupremeCookieAuthor

thanks for the review and i apologize since this is my first story and I didn't put in a lot of effort into writing this story. I just started this out of boredom but it blew up so I decided to continue. As for the bias against Sakura, I believe that it changes at around chapter 60-70 if i remember correctly. And yes, after chapter 72, the story mostly turns wholesome. :))

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who likes Sakura

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naruto

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