Dynamist

Translator here! I read a lot of fanfiction raws and liked this one the most out of all Douluo Dalu fanfics. Seeing as it has not been translated yet, I will do so for your convenience. Nevertheless, if I have overlooked and it is in fact being translated elsewhere, please let me know and I will stop. Pros: 1. No System, Chat Group, Diary or other such nonsense. All powers are native to Douluo Dalu itself. 2. The MC is Huo Yuhao who has been reborn after regretting his choices in the original life, so it is someone with a clearly developed character and not a Self-Insert OC. 3. The harem is quite big for all you degenerates 4. Good comedy, especially when Tang San is involved 5. Everything apart from the cons Cons: 1. The harem is a bit too big, resulting in many of the girls being neglected for the most part. But the girls who are the most plot-relevant get ample time of course. 2. No R-18. The author said in his notes that he had originally published R-18 chapter but it got censored so he had to remove it. 3. Characters like Skydream Iceworm and Electrolux are relevant to the plot but get little screen time.

Too many plot holes and continuity errors. The author notes actually say things like "There are plot holes in this chapter, ignore them and just enjoy" and "I don't care about how this is supposed to happen, meh the important thing is protagonist can get more girls now". Also, there is blatant bias against Sakura in at least upto the chapters I have read, so skip this if you like Sakura.

I usually don't review novels that I don't like and just ignore them, but since the synopsis is literally asking for 1 star reviews, here it is.

This really depends on whether it suits your tastes or not. The protagonist has a kind of personality that would appeal to some people and repel some others. Also, there is too much System content. By that I mean the protagonist frequently calls the System to show his stats, etc, even when nothing has changed at all, which takes up a lot of space doing nothing to progress the story.

The character development of the first few chapters have too many logical errors. Author warns that protagonist is going to be naive initially, but she is so naive that she can be considered almost retarded.