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    Dynamist2 months ago
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    Translator here! I read a lot of fanfiction raws and liked this one the most out of all Douluo Dalu fanfics. Seeing as it has not been translated yet, I will do so for your convenience. Nevertheless, if I have overlooked and it is in fact being translated elsewhere, please let me know and I will stop. Pros: 1. No System, Chat Group, Diary or other such nonsense. All powers are native to Douluo Dalu itself. 2. The MC is Huo Yuhao who has been reborn after regretting his choices in the original life, so it is someone with a clearly developed character and not a Self-Insert OC. 3. The harem is quite big for all you degenerates 4. Good comedy, especially when Tang San is involved 5. Everything apart from the cons Cons: 1. The harem is a bit too big, resulting in many of the girls being neglected for the most part. But the girls who are the most plot-relevant get ample time of course. 2. No R-18. The author said in his notes that he had originally published R-18 chapter but it got censored so he had to remove it. 3. Characters like Skydream Iceworm and Electrolux are relevant to the plot but get little screen time.

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    Dynamist3 years ago
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    Too many plot holes and continuity errors. The author notes actually say things like "There are plot holes in this chapter, ignore them and just enjoy" and "I don't care about how this is supposed to happen, meh the important thing is protagonist can get more girls now". Also, there is blatant bias against Sakura in at least upto the chapters I have read, so skip this if you like Sakura.

  • Dynamist
    Dynamist3 years ago
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    I usually don't review novels that I don't like and just ignore them, but since the synopsis is literally asking for 1 star reviews, here it is.

  • Dynamist
    Dynamist3 years ago
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    This really depends on whether it suits your tastes or not. The protagonist has a kind of personality that would appeal to some people and repel some others. Also, there is too much System content. By that I mean the protagonist frequently calls the System to show his stats, etc, even when nothing has changed at all, which takes up a lot of space doing nothing to progress the story.

  • Dynamist
    Dynamist3 years ago
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    The character development of the first few chapters have too many logical errors. Author warns that protagonist is going to be naive initially, but she is so naive that she can be considered almost retarded.

Douluo: Rebirth Yuhao

During the catastrophe of the God Realm, Huo Yuhao dragged Tang San into the space-time turbulence and perished together. When he opened his eyes again, he had returned to his childhood. "We have to do something for this distorted world, don't we?" He wanted to lead his former companions to a different future, but when he came to his senses, he found that the way his companions looked at him had become wrong. "Huo Yuhao, you still say you are not an Incubus!?" - "What? It costs money to awaken the Martial Spirit?" "Why am I a Spirit Master, but there is no Spirit Master subsidy? The Spirit Hall ten thousand years ago..." "The rapid development of Spirit Guides today will lead to the over-exploitation of resources in the Douluo plane and its decline. We should resist it!" After perishing together, Tang San, the environmental protection star who followed Huo Yuhao to be reborn in this era, said so. --------- Note - This is a translation. Someone started translating this here 5 months ago but dropped before publishing even a single chapter, so I am taking over. Raws: https://www.69yuedu.net/article/xgsrtzckuo.html Intented schedule - two chapters on weekends and holidays, one chapter on other days EDIT: I realized someone else is already translating this at https://www.webnovel.com/book/douluo-rebirth-of-yuhao-they-all-have-ulterior-motives._30715398108320705 I will continue only if they drop it so this will be on hiatus for now

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