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SupremeCookie
SupremeCookieAuthor4yr
2021-05-06 10:40

Author's shameless review here. This fanfiction is my first story so feel free to correct my mistakes so I can make this fanfiction better. Thank you.

In Naruto with Slightly Perverted System

SupremeCookie
4.8
151 Chs

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JheyDi
JheyDiLv3

3yr
gamabunda4873
gamabunda4873Lv5

can u name chapters i feel i would like it but my brain says no to the plain numbered chapters cant help it

3yr
SupremeCookie
SupremeCookieAuthor

Ok...

gamabunda4873:can u name chapters i feel i would like it but my brain says no to the plain numbered chapters cant help it
3yr
SupremeCookie
SupremeCookieAuthor

All done, My friend.

gamabunda4873:can u name chapters i feel i would like it but my brain says no to the plain numbered chapters cant help it
3yr
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gamabunda4873
gamabunda4873Lv5

thank you for your blessed words my ruler

SupremeCookie:All done, My friend.
3yr
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armando_ruiz
armando_ruizLv1

Author please do not include shadow clones in the intimate relationships of the protagonist! I would really appreciate it!

3yr
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DriftingDragon
DriftingDragonLv13

Agreed

armando_ruiz:Author please do not include shadow clones in the intimate relationships of the protagonist! I would really appreciate it!
3yr
Draco_Dragneel_7752
Draco_Dragneel_7752Lv3

can u write other anime with a slighty perverted system like one piece dragonball fairytail

3yr
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Daoist007877
Daoist007877Lv2

when he is done with the naruto verse are you going to have him traval to diffrent worlds, like ( other animes, manga books or movies) to collect more girls. if you do where would he go next

3yr
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Pan_Ale_trece
Pan_Ale_treceLv1

Porque no haces uno donde reencarna en Naruto pero con el podés de controlar tu edad y la de cualquiera para llegar al principio de la historio.pero renace en la era de Kaguya para ser el padre de rikudo Sennin pero tenés que llegar unos 60 años antes para poder tener poder para luchar y conoce a Kaguya y tiene hijo después se vuelve loca por el podér y la sellas contigo para estabilizar su locura y pasan los años y entrenas porque hay un espacio para entrenar y pararon los años entrenando y calmando a Kaguya y justo antes de la guerra la estabiliza y espera que la guerra continúe cuando se rompe el sello te libera y a Kaguya también y detienen la guerra y coloca cualquier cosa como conocer a sus nieto y eso y se prepara para la llegada de los otsusuki .XD NOSE ESCRIBIR HISTORIA PERO ESA VA A SER UNA DE LAS MEJORES.ME DA PAJA ESCRIBIR Y SI ALGUIEN ESCRIBE LA HISTORIA AVISEN PARA LEER PRFA XD.TENES QUE RELLENAR LAS COSA DE COMO SE CONOCIERON Y ESO ASTA LA PRÓXIMA

3yr
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Daoist_Rooster_Nim
Daoist_Rooster_NimLv4

U did excellent no need to be shy

3yr
No_friends_
No_friends_Lv4

hey someone is copying your work it has the name naruto perverted system

2yr
Chaos45
Chaos45Lv1

Donne a quelqu'un le livre pour continuer si tu vas plus écrire parceque t'as maintenant une vie donc astalavista nous

2yr
Lc_The_Second
Lc_The_SecondLv4

Hopefully when he's done with Naruto Verse. He will write another novel. people should abandon the marvel multiverse idea train.

Daoist007877:when he is done with the naruto verse are you going to have him traval to diffrent worlds, like ( other animes, manga books or movies) to collect more girls. if you do where would he go next
1yr
S4D0W_H4D3S
S4D0W_H4D3SLv4

author pls countinue this

1yr
Other Reviews
BeautifulBastard
BeautifulBastardLv5

longer chapters and less time skips would be good but overall is going well because of the "PLOT" ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).   ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

3yr

Uchiha_Rao
Uchiha_RaoLv3

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee you should be more explicit in R18 scenes can't wait till mc bangs kushina senseless and do mikoto too

4yr
daoistofspacetime
daoistofspacetimeLv14

Im going to be honest. Looking for a deep and interesting plot? not for you. Looking for some intense character development? not for you. This is just a fun read with some comedy, s*x, and an easy to understand plot. Enjoy as a casual read.

3yr
Exargna
ExargnaLv1

Extremely boring fan fiction. The characters are banal NPCs. The dialogues between the characters are stupid and monotonous, I constantly see praise for the main character there. The author, it seems, has never met a girl, relationships are not built like that, well, no, at 6-10 years old to arrange a "sexy" massage, from what do girls end up? What kind of nonsense is this? Why are there so many spam reviews without any normal criticism? Although what do I expect from working in webnovel, especially with the tag "harem".

3yr
Ayanokoji_Kiyopon
Ayanokoji_KiyoponLv2

BEST NARUTO FF, all things are included 1) op mc 2) no ntr or drama 3)lemons 4)all best girls 5)comedy top notch 6)nice mc, not those emo or antihero types or cold and indifferent or the one who just have one night stands. 7)author interacts regularly. I am rereading it from ch1 hehe~ hope that you will keep posting and would not stop. LOVE YOUR FF

3yr
IwantToLive
IwantToLiveLv3

this ff is awesome lol,the writing, the Character design and World background, overall 5.0 but can you make the Chap long? just suggestion 😃 and the picture of this ff is trash lol just change it please to catch readers attention ☺️

3yr
shyfix291
shyfix291Lv5

keep going author[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

4yr
loooooool
looooooolLv4

Very good story[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
lucifer_pendragon
lucifer_pendragonLv14

Honest review after reading this, The thing is mc becomes trap and gets f****d by naruto,sasuke,itachi,madara,orichumaru this book is only for M's and traps . . . . . . .

3yr
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