just as a fellow author i am i give this novel 4 because of the new world and the creation the author did. but 😑 the story is not so good i will say that as i also a writer i will say you should do something new story. like a normal family not the revenge type story. many readers readed the revenge type story thats the fan fiction is so popular this day. creat some new story. man not like this here every one can guess what your story main thing. like this title the book as a world overload. right most of readers will think about a Finally a different story. but you just killed by writing your story a revenge with tragic story. where mc try to claim the power of the top to take revenge. and in this process you make mc life harder and giving him a ton of luck etc to survived the dead like scenario. this type of novel is all over the net. so do sometimes new. like the age of adapts if you read the novel. you will find that start is different from most of the other novel. except the reincarnation details that the author copyed it from the other novels. the rest are different and so does the Storyline is Also. the mc of this story almost died if not for his quick Brain.yes there is luck on mc but the author of age of adapts didnt put much except on 5 occasion of the entire novel. this all i have to say man. your novel had great potential if not for your revenge with tragic background and the mc lot of lucks.....
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Didnt under stand half this purely because of grammer
As an author, at least you could do is write properly. Can't really appreciate your advice if you don't know how to write yourself. As far as I'm concerned I would not read your work, if the grammar in the story is as good as "this" even if the plot is top notch, it just destroys all the immersion it has
