Well I applause the author, that he was brave enough to write and publish his webnovel, not many can do it. The world is interesting, the cultivation system is a bit cliche, but it's not bad to have a cliche as how you use depends. Now to say what I didn't like that much. That is that he got a Katana, and the Celtic long sword, first if there isn't a Celtic culture in this world, why it is named as such, and katana, they are a bit cringe, but that is only something I dislike not something that bad, and it comes to reader tastes. But the Celtic sword can be a pothole as this world is different from ours. The system is too convenient, he really gives almost all to the mc, he was lazy to get some stones and buy for points, which can be useful. He got a conic hat, but those are suspicious and I doubt someone will not search for who bought one. And well as advice I can give, is that you shouldn't make your mc undefeatable, as humans, or even gods no one can be perfect. Well have a nice day. :3
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