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Risks
RisksLv152yr
2022-01-16 00:47

By far one of the best stories I've read on this app while the story is a little rough at first by the time you get to chapters 50-60 it gets addictive Devon is an amazing main character and the background of the world is filled with mystery that makes the story stand out and the development is also very good and the updates are very consistent and sometimes the author is even nice enough to throw in some extras. I'm very excited to see what is in store in the future for Devon's adventure and all the mysteries to finally come to light. The only negative thing I can say about this story is the grammar mistakes that are made but that will get better with time. I heavily recommend this story to everyone and hope to see it to its end

Worldly Overlord

Bhar_Yo
4.6
396 Chs

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Risks
RisksLv15

Harem but the harem comes a little late but all of them are important to the story. They are not just thrown there for no reason

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JunaZard
JunaZardLv4

nice

Risks:Harem but the harem comes a little late but all of them are important to the story. They are not just thrown there for no reason
2yr
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Aim_zx
Aim_zxLv14

hello i want to know if the mc op or meh?

2yr
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Risks
RisksLv15

He is op but not to the point where he just crushed everyone and the story becomes boring, there is balance. I don't want to spoil the story for you in case you read it but I'll say this, while he is op don't underestimate the characters in this novel. Also, the beginning is rough, author himself said that this was his first novel and he is not proud of it so you will have to get to chapters 80-85 then it becomes good and smooth.

Aim_zx:hello i want to know if the mc op or meh?
2yr
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Bhar_Yo
Bhar_YoAuthor

Risks:He is op but not to the point where he just crushed everyone and the story becomes boring, there is balance. I don't want to spoil the story for you in case you read it but I'll say this, while he is op don't underestimate the characters in this novel. Also, the beginning is rough, author himself said that this was his first novel and he is not proud of it so you will have to get to chapters 80-85 then it becomes good and smooth.
2yr
3
Aim_zx
Aim_zxLv14

Thanks for replying i might give it a try when i got time

Risks:He is op but not to the point where he just crushed everyone and the story becomes boring, there is balance. I don't want to spoil the story for you in case you read it but I'll say this, while he is op don't underestimate the characters in this novel. Also, the beginning is rough, author himself said that this was his first novel and he is not proud of it so you will have to get to chapters 80-85 then it becomes good and smooth.
2yr
3
Daoist50NmSs
Daoist50NmSsLv1

La. Chica que salvo de ser violada y la de la primera misión con la que tuvo relaciónes son de su Harem?

1yr
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Soun_Phavin
Soun_PhavinLv10

I gotta say I'm obsessed with this story🤣 Well the writing of the author...of my god, it's awesome like the world background, the characters, and the writing quality...the word perfect isn't enough to descript it. Well, the first chapter is so interesting with the flow of the story and the mc's family background. Should read this one!! 10/10

3yr

WinterTimeCrime
WinterTimeCrimeLv10

The author creates a world that's both exciting and intense. The characters are ruthless and the writer's way of portraying fights and battle scenes makes this all the more interesting. I've only read up the C3 but this is definitely a must-read for anyone looking for an action-packed, story-driven, and well-thought-out novel. I can't wait to read more Author-sama! Keep up the good work!

3yr
WiseJoker
WiseJokerLv12

There is a lot to say about this novel. Think the author don't have a lot of experience writing novel. So, I'm going to make it my job to comment as much as I can on the mistakes he makes. The story: The story development is kind of too fast. 50 chapters in, and he seems like he's unbeatable. Also, what kind of bs is this when the mc asked for the mysterious orbs from the auction boss and the boss agreed just because the mc won the stare-down. Isn't the mc suppose to be grateful that he is saved by the boss? Character design: The characters are fine, no problems with it. Just not that great enough to get a five star. World Background: ...Seriously, author? So far, I have not seen any explanation about the levels and the power catalogs and stuff like that. There should be like, Level 1-10, regular human stats to Olympic champions stats. Level 20-30, surpass human limits. So on, so forth. After reading a lot of chapters, I didn't get any in depth information about the worlds and people's abilities. Not trying to roast the author or criticize on no bases, just trying to give some constructive criticism to the author.

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Melshan
MelshanLv7

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3yr
Blue_Bird_0758
Blue_Bird_0758Lv4

just as a fellow author i am i give this novel 4 because of the new world and the creation the author did. but 😑 the story is not so good i will say that as i also a writer i will say you should do something new story. like a normal family not the revenge type story. many readers readed the revenge type story thats the fan fiction is so popular this day. creat some new story. man not like this here every one can guess what your story main thing. like this title the book as a world overload. right most of readers will think about a Finally a different story. but you just killed by writing your story a revenge with tragic story. where mc try to claim the power of the top to take revenge. and in this process you make mc life harder and giving him a ton of luck etc to survived the dead like scenario. this type of novel is all over the net. so do sometimes new. like the age of adapts if you read the novel. you will find that start is different from most of the other novel. except the reincarnation details that the author copyed it from the other novels. the rest are different and so does the Storyline is Also. the mc of this story almost died if not for his quick Brain.yes there is luck on mc but the author of age of adapts didnt put much except on 5 occasion of the entire novel. this all i have to say man. your novel had great potential if not for your revenge with tragic background and the mc lot of lucks.....

3yr
Lordwlesh
LordwleshLv13

just a free advice if you like take it or just leave it . please don't these reader's advice affect your story . don't include unnecessary things like romance and all those stuff . especially harem these things are like fire if don't written well it will destroy your entire story but If you have confidence and a well directed plot then to i advice to be cautious. please don't these reader's affect the way you think they are here to read your story not to direct your story and most important do listen effective things and critic but not trash . and in the last thankyou for your efforts 😊

2yr
Thee_AngryBird
Thee_AngryBirdLv5

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CristiaN
CristiaNLv2

Reveal spoiler

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Dan_immortal
Dan_immortalLv2

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